Heart and Sole, Chapter 18

[manniness]

It’s brillig when Alice and Tarrant galumph back into Iplam, which is rather more developed than it had been a half dozen hours earlier.

“This is too much,” Alice breathes, gazing from the new barn to the bathing house, then from the outhouse to the aviary.

“Don’ fret,” Mally replies.  “We left yahs lots o’ paint-work t’ do.”

“Still…” she begins to

Comments

[emeisle]

AHHHH!!! His heart! Alice!!
And oh god solving the riddle....well at least that's what I think she did. Dude. This is the greatest chapter EVER.

I think I need to be a little more coherent to respond to this in full thoughts.

[manniness]

Hey! Thanks for commenting!! (I know your schedule's really busy.)

And hey, I earned myself some capital letters: EVER. Niiiice. (^__^)b

[anonymous]

You may have just killed me. Poor, poor Alice and poor, poor Hatter! Still, you always manage to make an amazing chapter when you do this to them XD

Please please please post more soon <3

Konekoxsasaki

[manniness]

Don't die! The fic's not done yet! *preps for CPR*

Thank you so much for praising my skills at tormenting characters. I do try my best. (^__~)

More to come soon! Maybe in a day. Two at most.

[starlight623]

Aaaaahhhhh! I wondered when she would be back. And right then?? Evil!! That was even worse than Hamish interrupting the kiss!

And now I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter! Was Tarrant actually bleeding? Is his heart broken again? What will the doctor think of him?

Waiting again... *pout*

[starlight623]

Oh! And Hamish made a promise! Do the original OPK rules apply here? ;-)

[manniness]

Nope, Hamish is safe. Sort of. I'm thinkin' that if he breaks this promise, the Hatter will hunt him down and claymore him. (Yes, I just made a new verb and I LOVE IT.)

(^__~)

[manniness]

Yay! You caught the reference to Tarrant maybe-possibly-bleeding. I was a little worried it'd get lost in there.

Thanks so much for feedbacking me, dear! (^__^)

[hikarisansblue]

More more more more more more more.....Please?

[manniness]

Maybe tomorrow! Tuesday at the latest. (^__^)b

[makrciana]

Great Chapter!!

Hamish has never been more opportune
As for Iracebeth...on the contrary, totally inopportune!!

Alice has to answer Tarrant request (“I’m askin’ ye, on bended knee, teh b’ mae-" =)) perhaps for that time, Tarrant's heart beat a little for her!!

[manniness]

Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it. (^__^)

Opportune!Hamish. I think he likes that a lot. My Hamish Muse is strutting around like a peacock now (but he looks like a turkey). (^__~)

I hope you like the next chapter, too!