Heart and Sole, Chapter 6

Oct 05, 2010 03:06


Alice doubts she’ll ever cease to be surprised by Underland.

The White Carriage had made its first stop at a familiar garden where the White Queen had spoken to the primroses and conversed in strange, finger waggling silence with the rocking horse flies.  Only when Alice had nearly tripped over a set of overgrown miniature stairs had she noticed the ( Read more... )

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makrciana December 26 2011, 23:14:15 UTC
Aww! cute chapter
Tarrant's naiveness is endearing, that "Fee on say" thing was sweet (and funny :D)...and the tea making art too

Please, continue soon

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manniness December 27 2011, 01:35:13 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. I'm especially happy with the "Fee on say" part. Later, we'll learn more about how people get married in Underland. (^__^)

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makrciana December 27 2011, 15:19:00 UTC
And I'm glad that I caught the joke! :D (because the phonetic it's different in other languages ^__^)

And yeah I'm enjoying your stories very much!!

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manniness December 28 2011, 01:34:48 UTC
Hello! Thank you so much for sharing your love of this story (such as it is thus far). I shall consult my muse and hopefully have an update for you soon! (^__^)

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:3 anonymous March 14 2012, 20:01:17 UTC
Ahhhh! I was so excited to see you've begun a new story! I absolutely love your One Promise Kept, and the way in which you write the Hatter was both utterly perfect and inspiring. Keep it coming, please, I can't wait for the rest :D

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clay_roses August 19 2012, 22:02:51 UTC
The confusion over the term 'fiance' made me giggle. Of course the Hatter wouldn't know what Hamish meant when he said that! XD It also explains rather nicely why Tarrant took to Hamish saying that so calmly.

Edit: Oh, dear, it seems I can't spell today. Sorry. XD

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niphuria May 26 2013, 21:47:58 UTC
This was priceless! I thought Tarrant was piqued that Hamish had been Alice's fiance, only to find out that he thought something quite different!

I do adore Hamish's point of view, it really makes Underland pop so much more when we see it thru his "conventional" eyes. :)

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