Chapter Two: The Laird and Lady of Iplam [Rated M]

May 12, 2010 01:44



Warning: This entry contains references to sexual situations. 
[NON-explicit]

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“I’ve just a thing or two to do in the workshop,” he’d said. “Go on to bed.”

He’d lost an hour when she’d asked him to lie down with her. Lost an hour, but gained a sense of peace and tranquility that he wouldn’t trade for anything. The memory of his wife’s face, ( Read more... )

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pearlseed August 22 2010, 23:38:37 UTC
I don't know all the story except the movie, but what you've writ is stunning. Love your picture of the wonderous madman, his love for the beauty Alice. I love your vocabulary and the pace, tone of your sentences. Action moves neatly, passion is so pretty between the two. Guess I'm saying I truly enjoyed what you have shared.

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manniness August 23 2010, 02:04:16 UTC
Hello! Thank you so much for letting me know that you're enjoying OPK! If you're interested in reading the original books, there are copies available on the Internet. I think Literature.Org has both Lewis Carroll books up... Anyway!

I'm so glad you like the story so far! Don't be a stranger! (^__~)/

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