Chapter Six: An Unlikely Guest (1)

[manniness]

[Because I almost killed LJ with the size of this chapter, I'm posting it in two parts.]

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Alice is Beautiful.

Tarrant watches her as they all muddle through this dire and frightening time. He brushes his fingertips over her knee, unable to resist touching her despite the gravity of the queen’s lecture on basic healing arts. He can’t stop

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MoonlightxMidnight

[anonymous]

I love how you made a 3rd one, and I have to tell you it's as good as the rest! You know how they say that the first one is the best and the next sequals are shitty? Well that's totally not you! Omg i can't tell you how much I love the 3rd book already. The hatter, so sweet, very darn good in every aspect that you write him in, you put such a good character in him, i love the emotions that is expressed through him and Alice, like how he thinks shes beautiful, and that kiss in the chapter was....fantastic! so powerful. And Alice, the corageous, muchness with her child, and Tarrant but worrying for all of them secretly. I'm glad you made it secret, it gives so much to the story. Chessur is the cocky, snarky cat thats perfect for him. And leif is quite funny "The Hatter looks up at her, takes the afternoon ship to the Isle o’ Madness, and snarls a welcome upon his arrival there " I laughed my ass of. liteally. loool. And not just leif is funny, Alice and her sexual induendos, Tarrant, Chess, it's all good. I love it so much. I wish Tim Burton would find ur story somehow and sequal it, that's how much of a fantastic, whimsical, great writer you are.

Re: MoonlightxMidnight

[manniness]

Hello, again, Moonlight!

It's nice to hear from you again. So glad you like the third book so far!!!

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