Slow in some areas, fast in others [GRi - OneShot]

Oct 11, 2009 15:28

Seung Ri slowly walked out of the car and took his only belongings with him, which wasn’t much. A little bag with clothes. The taxi driver drove off right away and let him standing in front of an old, little and gray house. The house was lonely, surrounded by a few trees that have had better lives.

So this was were people like him were taken to, ( Read more... )

#oneshot, #challenge: 30 big bang, 08: slow in some areas fast in others, p: ji yong/seung ri

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aishiteru_amie October 11 2009, 14:10:26 UTC
hehehehe~
that was cute!
i love how ri could order ji around.
the kissing part is the best.
kamsa!!

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mangalover93 October 12 2009, 11:22:04 UTC
I think Ri would have fun ordering Ji around xP
payback for all the teasing ;P
mhm ^^
Thanks for commenting and reading :)

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cindyxmc October 11 2009, 16:19:21 UTC
SPOT!!!!

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cindyxmc October 11 2009, 19:20:54 UTC
OMG, YOU ARE SOO CLOSE TO WRITING SMUT!
WHY DIDN'T YOU BB?! LOL
anyways, i love love love seungri's power!
it's soooooooooooooooo coool! LOL

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mangalover93 October 12 2009, 11:25:47 UTC
I can't write smut, s: not old enough ;P (lame excuse)
but i get too embarrass, only thinking, how am I suppose to write it xP
I would like to have Seung Ri's power :D order the teachers to let us go home,
no homework, no test xD
thanks for reading and commenting ^^

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cindyxmc October 12 2009, 18:17:52 UTC
OMGOMGOMOGMG, THAT IS SOO TRUE!
order the teachers to have no class today and no text and they will give us all As for no reason. LOL
THAT IS SERIOUSLY A LAME EXCUSE! LOLS
but it's okay.
i will feel uncomfortable writing it too. =)

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daesung_fanatic October 11 2009, 18:18:18 UTC
deh flow made me bored

gomen gomen

I'm sorry I ish picky with fanfics...but I've read most of ur's....

maybe I'm just not into wanting to read anything atm LOLZ

I mean I did just wake up LOLZ

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mangalover93 October 12 2009, 11:26:15 UTC
Thanks for reading anyway ^^
good thing you're honest ;P
thanks for commenting :)

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daesung_fanatic October 12 2009, 20:33:22 UTC
Ur welcome

but but but but but but but but but but BUT

being honest makes me feel guilty :(

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vaneszikkipower October 11 2009, 19:03:41 UTC
that was great bb!!
Jiyongie NAKED!!! YES!!lol

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mangalover93 October 12 2009, 11:27:10 UTC
thanks unnie ^^
hahah, many girls would like to be Top or Seung RI.
thanks for reading and commenting :)

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vaneszikkipower October 12 2009, 17:15:14 UTC
You're welcome honey :)
Well i like jiyongie lol... not too much but still ;)

And i always like reading you and i can not read without commenting lol :)

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prpldrkrse October 11 2009, 22:52:39 UTC
YES for naked Jiyong! :D
I love this, it's funny x3
I'd like to know what'll happen to them afterwards tho lol

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mangalover93 October 12 2009, 11:28:35 UTC
ahahah xP
I'm glad you find it funny :)
I totally fail writing funny ><
haha, let's just say ji and ri stayed in the room very long ~~~
the rest is up to your imagination xP
thanks for commenting and reading ^^

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