Thank you so much for entering!!!! Ahhhh I'm really sad you're eliminated because I loved seeing your Hana icons every week so much... like when I saw your icon this week and started laughing out loud ^^;; thank you for signing up! And thanks for wishing me good luck in class I'll definitely need it xD
+ It's humorous though it is kind of weird that the top of the head is cut off. = I am really not fond of the coloring of this icon. I don't think that the purple and blue on the text go together particularly well, and the orange on the glasses seems even more out of place. - The cutoff on the top of the characters head is a little awkward how it suddenly goes from color to straight across gray. The text going across the corner is also a little distracting. Maybe either making it a little smaller and moving it up &/or finishing off the top of the head would make things blend a bit better. I do like the use of the text bubbles and the actual coloring though. = The way the character's head is cut off at the top looks confusing; a border that would explain the sudden cut-off might make that less distracting. - Awesome cropping! But the text differences between the speech bubble and and caption make it feel a tad disjointed. - The coloring seems rather flat, more pronounced shadows would look better. Also, the way the image suddenly ends makes the icon look a bit unfinished. - (it looks like the maker tried to use an icon for the top of icon, but it doesn't stand out enough so it just seems her head is cut of for no reason. And the crooked text doesn't help. - (It looks awkward to have the crop end at the head like that. A second texture cropped up top against the end of the image could help make that crop seem more intentional. Also, it almost feels like there's too much text with having the text bubble already. However, the coloring of the image, I like a lot!) - Image doesn't really stand out and the overall effect of the icon is that it looks a bit choppy :( - The font doesn't match well and the random cut of the hair is also awkward.
+ It's humorous though it is kind of weird that the top of the head is cut off.
= I am really not fond of the coloring of this icon. I don't think that the purple and blue on the text go together particularly well, and the orange on the glasses seems even more out of place.
- The cutoff on the top of the characters head is a little awkward how it suddenly goes from color to straight across gray. The text going across the corner is also a little distracting. Maybe either making it a little smaller and moving it up &/or finishing off the top of the head would make things blend a bit better. I do like the use of the text bubbles and the actual coloring though.
= The way the character's head is cut off at the top looks confusing; a border that would explain the sudden cut-off might make that less distracting.
- Awesome cropping! But the text differences between the speech bubble and and caption make it feel a tad disjointed.
- The coloring seems rather flat, more pronounced shadows would look better. Also, the way the image suddenly ends makes the icon look a bit unfinished.
- (it looks like the maker tried to use an icon for the top of icon, but it doesn't stand out enough so it just seems her head is cut of for no reason. And the crooked text doesn't help.
- (It looks awkward to have the crop end at the head like that. A second texture cropped up top against the end of the image could help make that crop seem more intentional. Also, it almost feels like there's too much text with having the text bubble already. However, the coloring of the image, I like a lot!)
- Image doesn't really stand out and the overall effect of the icon is that it looks a bit choppy :(
- The font doesn't match well and the random cut of the hair is also awkward.
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