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[mandysbitch]

It's het! OMG! Apologies to my McShep friends (only I'm not really sorry...diversity is *good* for you) but this is a special case. Ho, ho, ho! (Also, it was *really* hard not to make this about Rodney *g*)

Title: War Zones
Fandom:: Stargate: Atlantis
Category: Weir/ Sheppard
Rating: PG-13
Summary: “you refuse to be surprised by the person you’ve

Comments

[mandysbitch]

I don't want to like this pairing

I had a little trouble getting a feel for it myself. The 2nd person helped, funnily enough.

Making Elizabeth both likable *and* in character is a hard sell for me, but you managed it very well in this. Thanks.

Thanks for reading. I really appreciate people who will give a pairing a try if there's a chance they might get a good story out of it. I will usually try anything if I think it might be written well.

*writes mental sequel in which Rodney helps John get over it all*

Heh heh.

John: Wow, I'm all sad and stuff because I suggested sex to Elizabeth and she turned me down. *pouts*
Rodney: No, see, that's where you went wrong. You clearly have the hots for *me* and everything else you try will be a failure as a result.
John: Are you saying I unconsciously engineered the whole scenario so that she would turn me down?
Rodney: Exactly.
John: Wow. I really am smart.
Rodney: Yes, but not as smart as me - although I think that goes without saying - sex?
John: Sure thing!

The end. :)

(That's how it went in my head, anyway *g*)

[celli]

Wow, this is a fantastic look at Elizabeth. I like the exploration of her diplomatic roots, and especially the way she finds herself separated from them when she's vengeful about John.

[mandysbitch]

The diplomat thing came from a heavy West Wing influence, I think. *g* I"m glad you appreciated it.

Thanks for commenting. :)

[celli]

oops, sorry, this is what happens when I reply at random. :)