HELP!

[mandylynn4]

I'm going to be in the need of a beta reader within the next week. The story is for spring_with_xan and it's going to be semi-shortish. I don't know yet if there'll be porny bits...haven't gotten that far yet. I do know that I want to make references to Spike for all seasons of Buffy and a bit spoilerish for Angel Season 5. Do we consider that spoilery still? It's been two years now... I basically just need help with characterization and sentence structure/grammar. I'm quite a bit rusty with writing...

Anywho, ANY help would be greatly appreciated. *loves flist*

Thanks!

Mandylynn