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A Scary October Night. 10/2/95
One night I woke up because the wind was howling really loud. The shadows of the trees looked like monsters. I knew that there was a graveyard in back of my house. So I went to the window to see if there was any monsters, ghosts, witches, or vampires in the graveyard but..... before I could get to the window the door opened but nothing was there.
Then a witch walked in and said "would you like to be boiled and eaten?"
"NO!" I said.
Then I went to the window and looked out at the graveyard and saw witches boiling frog soup, two vampires drinking blood and there was ghosts coming out of graves too!
Then I heard foot step's coming down the stairs. I went to the stair's and I looked hard but nothing was there but...... this time I heard a ghost!
Then the window opened and a bat flew in.
"This is one scary October night!" I said while I was running in my room.
When I got to my room a ghost was in my room!
Then I heard a back door open and a Frankenstein walked in! Then he walked back out.
Then I looked out the window and saw zombies surrounding the house.
"Oh no a ghost is in my room and zombies are surrounding the house what am I going to do!" I said.
So I ran up the stairs and slept on the floor.
In the morning nothing was there not even a ghost. All I could smell was the smell of my mom baking banana bread. So I went down stairs had some banana bread, hugged my mom, went in my room and said to myself "That was one scary October night!"
THE END.
The Picnic At The Beach: Age 7
Today are family is going to the beach. Before we go we have to eat breakfast, we also should brush are theeth, and make lunch.
We all got in the car together. My little sister and I brought some toys. When we got to the beach a lady walked by us. Then I spotted a candy store, so I asked my Uncle for some money.
Then I went to the candy store and bought some chocolate. I ate half of it and put the rest on the chest we brought. Then my sister and I rolled and laughed.
After that we are are sandwiches. Then I went to get my chocolate but there was none left.
Then we went swiming in the sea and my sister asked "Is the sea sick?"
"No" I said.
"Then why is the sea roaring like a blizzerdes winds at wintertime or like a monster?"
"I don't no" I said.
Then we got out of the water.
My sister fell when she was getting out of the water.
Then I heard my uncle say "I need a job!"
Then I hread my mom say "calm down."
Then I put my srit on over my bathing suit and went to the stud of a chief and try to move a big rock to see if there were any crabs. All of the sudden the wind shot right at me like someone thourthing a rock at me. The wind was really rough so they had to go home.
When they got home my sister and I brushed are teeth. Then I went to my room again and again I said to myslef "I love my life" "I love my life."
But the bad part is: since its Sunday I don't get to stay up late!
THE END
typos and all
A Scary October Night. 10/2/95
One night I woke up because the wind was howling really loud. The shadows of the trees looked like monsters. I knew that there was a graveyard in back of my house. So I went to the window to see if there was any monsters, ghosts, witches, or vampires in the graveyard but..... before I could get to the window the door opened but nothing was there.
Then a witch walked in and said "would you like to be boiled and eaten?"
"NO!" I said.
Then I went to the window and looked out at the graveyard and saw witches boiling frog soup, two vampires drinking blood and there was ghosts coming out of graves too!
Then I heard foot step's coming down the stairs. I went to the stair's and I looked hard but nothing was there but...... this time I heard a ghost!
Then the window opened and a bat flew in.
"This is one scary October night!" I said while I was running in my room.
When I got to my room a ghost was in my room!
Then I heard a back door open and a Frankenstein walked in! Then he walked back out.
Then I looked out the window and saw zombies surrounding the house.
"Oh no a ghost is in my room and zombies are surrounding the house what am I going to do!" I said.
So I ran up the stairs and slept on the floor.
In the morning nothing was there not even a ghost. All I could smell was the smell of my mom baking banana bread. So I went down stairs had some banana bread, hugged my mom, went in my room and said to myself "That was one scary October night!"
THE END.
The Picnic At The Beach: Age 7
Today are family is going to the beach. Before we go we have to eat breakfast, we also should brush are theeth, and make lunch.
We all got in the car together. My little sister and I brought some toys. When we got to the beach a lady walked by us. Then I spotted a candy store, so I asked my Uncle for some money.
Then I went to the candy store and bought some chocolate. I ate half of it and put the rest on the chest we brought. Then my sister and I rolled and laughed.
After that we are are sandwiches. Then I went to get my chocolate but there was none left.
Then we went swiming in the sea and my sister asked "Is the sea sick?"
"No" I said.
"Then why is the sea roaring like a blizzerdes winds at wintertime or like a monster?"
"I don't no" I said.
Then we got out of the water.
My sister fell when she was getting out of the water.
Then I heard my uncle say "I need a job!"
Then I hread my mom say "calm down."
Then I put my srit on over my bathing suit and went to the stud of a chief and try to move a big rock to see if there were any crabs. All of the sudden the wind shot right at me like someone thourthing a rock at me. The wind was really rough so they had to go home.
When they got home my sister and I brushed are teeth. Then I went to my room again and again I said to myslef "I love my life" "I love my life."
But the bad part is: since its Sunday I don't get to stay up late!
THE END