Love and Blood, part 3

Nov 09, 2009 18:50


New chapter is here!

Name: Love and Blood

Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou

Pairing: Gwendal/Conrad

Warnings: incest, yaoi, lemon (citrus in general),

Rating: T - M/NC-17 - R

Summary: The brothers were always very close, maybe even closer than brothers could be. Especially two of them. But what if the truth came out? Maybe it's time for Conrad and Gwendal to ( Read more... )

romance, fanfic, conrad, gwendal, gwenrad, shounen-ai/yaoi, incest, kyou kara maou, drama

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darence_evren November 28 2009, 02:45:34 UTC
Well! I just typed this whole review for your chapter and then, my oh-so-trusty-wonderful computer, broke momentarily. That moment was enough. I lost the comment so I am going to try to remember what it was that I said. If it sounds weird or like it's missing something, that's just me forgetting to put something in that was in the comment that broke.

I must say that I ended up grinning at the screen when Conrad came busting through the doors and made his small speech.

Now, this may just be my awful, dirty mind. But about the spanking that Gwendal had wanted to give to Conrad? I could help but think: "If they had been just a bit older, that could end up very pervy!"

I don't know if your into S M smut at all, but I don't wish to offend. It simply popped into my head. *Hit self on head with palm* ^________^

Other then that.....I love the way that Gwendal gave no breaks in his answers and no way for the other lords to get the upper hand. So tall and strong in defending his and Conrad's relationship! Not that I had expected any less of him. The ending made me happy. Yuri, Gwendal, and Conrad all did their parts beautifully.

So....whens the next chapter gonna' be out? There is a next chapter, is there not? I think I may just have to cry were I to learn that you don't plan to finish, or was that just the end??

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manaika November 28 2009, 18:50:57 UTC
Oh, how I understand that...It happened to me a lot of times too. It's always better to copy the text before posting. ^^

COnrad came heroically to the aid of his brother. How sweet of him to help out his beloved!
Conrad: It is, isn't it? *smile*
Hehe...

Oh, don't worry, I thought exactly the same. *wide grin* And trust me, there will be a lot of kink. And everybody knows, that those two like it the best when it involves-
Gwendal: Ehem.
What is it?
Gwendal: Ehem!
Oh come on, you know you-
Gwendal: EHEM!

Gwendal is just the big teddybear he is! *hugs her ravenhaired Gwen-chan* Of course h defends his brother (and lover) and does everything in the name of love! ...Now why did a bearbee popp into my mind? *turns to Gwendal with a sheepish smile* Do you possibly know?
Gwendal: Restrain yourself.
Spoilsport.

Oh, don't worry, I'm going to torture them a bit further, ne? *nudges Conrad*
Conrad: *sigh*
The next chapter is at my beta's, but she doesn't have that much time now, so it can take a while. And chapter 5 is half done.
So don't worry, the end is not near yet!

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darence_evren November 29 2009, 09:05:36 UTC
YES!!! I was afraid that was all you were going to write for the story!!

Hahah! Conrad's all proud of himself in that cute, modest way, that he saved Gwendal from possibly getting ripped to shreds! *grin*
Yes! I love kinky sex! Gwendal's all, Private....Private...PRIVATE!
And Conrad's sigh at the end was soooooo concealed glee!

How many chapters do you think are going to be in the story when your done? Do you have an ending in mind?? Sorry. If I'm being to nosy you can tell me to be quiet and wait for you to post the story!

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manaika November 29 2009, 20:46:54 UTC
Naaah, I woudn't be able to put as much angst into it!
*wicked grin*
They're still to suffer a lot! mwuhahaaa

The always subtle Conrad, ne?
And I love his sighs! Conrad has the best sigh in the world! My best friend agrees with that!

I thought about around 10 chapters, not more. And if I look over what I planned it should come out like that. And I have an ending already in mind... And I give you a small clue: It has something to do with Yozak. But I'm not going to say more! It would spoil the fun, hehe.

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darence_evren November 30 2009, 03:50:26 UTC
I am getting scared for the poor boy. Just don't hurt him too much, okay?? And this is physical hurt, not emotional??

Ten chapters is a good number, I think. It should give you enough time to get through all the story and plot line you might have been wanting to do, and there's plenty of space to add any other little ideas that popped out at you!

Josak, huh? What fun might you be speaking of? I see no fun in this situation. Pray, when you find it, please, do tell me what it is. For I long to know what you find amusing!

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manaika November 30 2009, 13:39:31 UTC
Don´t worry, he´s my favorite character...and somehow I always end up torturing my favs the most...
But don´t worry, he´ll survive it! And in the end, he´ll be happy! And as for physically or emortionally...a little from both. Though, rather more on the emotional side. But he has a quick recovery rate, so it won´t be that tragic.

yup! I might make a fic with various side-stories when I finish this. It´ll be a relatively short fic, considering it all, but a lot will happen! Every chapter will be kinda out of their personal life as a couple and the troubles they have to go through, both on the proffessional and personal way.

Uhhh...I don´t remember anymore...right now, in the cold weather outside, with my frozen fingers (I´m in the city and on internet through wifi), but I guess I´ll remmeber when I come back home and then I´ll reply to you.

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manaika November 30 2009, 13:42:10 UTC
Ah that! I just read my previous reply.
Ah...it will be a happy ending. Period. I´ m saying no more.

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darence_evren December 1 2009, 17:15:35 UTC
I will reply to both in this box.

That sounds like me! We have dial-up at my house and in order to get to wifi, I ended siting on the floor outside a secretary's office in order to catch the signal strong enough! I was there for three hours or so! Great fun, frozen tush.

The add on various side story fic sounds great! As long as you can keep this story line getting on, I will be happy! It is most absolutely a comfort to know that Josak won't end up dead! Thanks!

When I move though, I will have high speed internet which will be perfect!

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manaika December 1 2009, 17:37:20 UTC
Poor thing...I can so understand you...

We have internet at home, also high speed (supposed to be), just my notebook doesń't and so I have to go somewhere where there is at least a little signal. I am catching one at home (which is unnecessary, since we have at home, and also, it's not strong so totally useless when I want to download something) and in the city on an open square next to the main square.
...outside...winter...cold...freeze...
*sigh*
What you don't do for a little internet...

Naaaah, I wouldn't kill YOzak! ...would I? Hmmm...
but not in this fic, don't worry! ^^
Maybe I could write a mytery/horror/tragedy/drama kind of... Oooh...new ideas... O.O

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