pulling at me like the stars do, you're like gravity, fei/jia, pg

Dec 12, 2010 22:36

xiao longbao means chinese dumplings in mandarin! my favourite food djksjdks you should all try it one day. written for the unniefic challenge.

pulling at me like the stars do, you're like gravity
fei/jia, pg, 694w
fei sacrifices her beauty sleep for something as trivial as another's troubled sleep.

lo and behold )

pg, fei/jia, miss a, fanfiction

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ruo_qi December 12 2010, 14:52:51 UTC
I hope you don't think I'm a stalker, since I'm the first commenter ;____; I was just stalking in unniefic and saw your comment, I swear! Rofl.

if Min hadn't insisted they all stay up to wait for Christmas to roll around
For some reason once I read this line the literal image of the four of them rolling on the floor of their dorm popped into my head lol.

This entire fic is all sorts of wonderful though. Fei's such a natural leader in this, and even though MinSu don't even have any dialogue I still love how you added in bits and pieces of their dorky presence ♥

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mammothcock December 13 2010, 14:41:25 UTC
no of course i don't think you're a stalker! a little bird must have told you~

LMAO THEY WOULD.

it's possible though, for a group of people to snore in tandem. I'VE HAD FIRST HAND EXPERIENCE YO. thank you for reading and commenting! :DDD

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g_odalisque13 December 12 2010, 21:20:03 UTC
gosh, i loved this too.
it was so sweet. i love how Fei even manages to be nurturing when she's blushing.
and Min and Suzy's snoring was a lovely imagined soundtrack. haha.
i guess i'm stalking your fics now! lol.

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mammothcock December 13 2010, 14:44:16 UTC
yay! :D

hahah i think a blush would look gorgeous on fei. indeed. :') though tbh it's more disturbing than anything else...

i'm honoured, thank you!

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dreamoscope December 14 2010, 03:46:06 UTC
the way you write is really beautiful :)
theres an air of lightness surrounding your fic thats just lovely :)
fei is gorgeous, and she have this motherly image in her, so im glad that you're portraying her like this.

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mammothcock December 14 2010, 16:03:38 UTC
thank you! :DDD

fei is beautiful indeed, and she's always given me elder sister vibes hahah. thank you once again for commenting!

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mammothcock January 24 2011, 14:34:38 UTC
fskflajfk omg you are wonderful and this is an amazing comment ♥ rofl can't you just imagine min snoring away like the obnoxious person she is?

yey thank you i'm glad you liked that line! i like it too. hurr i put a lot of thought into describing the atmosphere.

lol your keysmash i love it. jia WOULD fall asleep waiting for her drink, lmao. :DDD

i was actually really at a loss at how to end it off, so i kind of half-assed it because i was running out of tiiiime, so it's a relief to know that you like it and think it appropriate!

yeah i feel really bad for them, moving all the way from china to debut in korea where the culture and customs are SO different. i'd die from culture shock, i would.

fkskgks thank you! ♥ i'm honoured.

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mammothcock January 27 2011, 11:47:22 UTC
oh but apparently min doesn't share the dorm with the girls, does she? i'm not sure about this, actually. :|

ahhhh yeah that's what i usually do when i don't have time to think of a proper ending hurrrr. glad you liked it anyway! and cries i am, i am. school has been a bitch, though 8(

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qrizta March 4 2011, 05:07:24 UTC
This is nice. Ur fic is the first Miss A fic that i read. lol I've been looking for miss A fics to read and i got lucky for stumbling upon bad_but_good. XD

The emphasize on double snoring by Suzy Min made me laugh tbh. lol When Jia asked her hand back from Fei, I couldn't help but blushing for Fei. They're so cute.

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mammothcock March 5 2011, 03:44:21 UTC
that's such an honour, thank you! n___n

suzy and min would make really cute snorers lmao. thanks for reading!

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