The upside to being the brains of an operation, Youngwoon thought smugly as Hyukjae danced in his heart-patterned boxers and the members howled with mirth, was that he did not have to do the dirty work. Poor Hyukjae had yet to learn the intricacies of pranking, it seemed. loved this part haha, how Kangin's dragged Hyukjae into his pranking but somehow it's still Hyuk that gets bullied in the end lol.
the pub scene seems like it must've been hard to do, but I like how the dialogue makes it seem almost perfectly reasonable for Kangin to get as angry as he did. the Kangteuk argument after and how Jungsu doesn't trust his words anymore were incredibly depressing which I guess is what makes it so good. ;A;
and then the cheerful birthday scene in between that and Kangin talking to Jungsu again fdsklj. felt almost like nothing was wrong and everything was as it was before and throwing cakes into faces is so Suju haha. but then, the following scene. ;~;
Kangin is our brother and friend, and we love him. /sobs
all of Suju coming together to ambush him afterward really gave that statement weight, and I really like how you doled out the lines, how it's very Donghae to blurt out something first and very Kyuhyun to cut Kangin off and how Sungmin is as always the voice of reason kind of? already told you how much I like the extinct thing haha, how it probably sounds all serious in Hyukjae and Donghae's heads but it's also their own weird flavor of talking.
and the last scene and everything kind of mostly working out ;~~; “Oh god,” Youngwoon said, horrified. “Stop it. We’re in public.” ahaha love that Jungsu's finally stopped with his act and these two are kind of back to their silly embarrassing dynamics.
and yeah, the ending is perfect and so very them and I still love thiiiiis and you for writing it. ♥!
oh my goodness WHAT A LONG COMMENT CHFDJSKF THANK YOU ♥
- i really liked the Dead. Like bulgogi line too LMFAO - this makes so much sense in kind of describing how the relationship between Kangin and the rest has changed YES EXACTLY - so i think it's your turn to write kangteuk now - i really do - i liked that paragraph too! although it made me sad. in fact, A LOT OF THIS MADE ME SAD. but some of it made me happy like, uh, the ending. :| - I LOVED WRITING THAT GUITAR STRINGS SCENE OK IT MADE ME TINGLE TINGLE - this scene goes from humorous to angsty happens really smoothly and yet it's incredibly sad IKR LIKE MY HAPPY SCENES NEVER END HAPPILY WHAT IS THIS TRAVESTY - hyuk is a loser. nuff said - how Jungsu doesn't trust his words anymore YES this is EXACTLY why youngwoon got so pissed off. i mean, i definitely would - it probably sounds all serious in Hyukjae and Donghae's heads but it's also their own weird flavor of talking obv because eunhae PERSONIFY WEIRD - tbh i still feel a bit iffy about the ending. it's just so HAPPY. it doesn't tie in with this fic, which is, like, SAD SAD SAD and then you've got a little happy scene over there. IT IS SO STRANGE
anyway THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO MUCH FOR DOING THE BETA WORK AND STAYING UP THE WHOLE NIGHT TO WALK ME THROUGH THE EDITS AND. SOBS ALL OVER YOU. ♥♥♥
writing bwuh what is that. u___u have a few ideas floating in my head but they're AU or trainee or other things non-comeback-related. but I'll try! sometime. ;;
a lot of this made me sad too did you see how much I abused ;~; afdlksj. but but yeah it ended happy so \o/! I thought the ending wasn't that out of place, a few of the other scenes before were also really touching and sweet. and it's not an entirely perfect happily-ever-after ending either, because Kangin's answer isn't a definite but a 'not sure' which.. ;__; idk, I liked how there weren't proclamations of forever or anything over-the-top, and how it was kind of just this day-to-day moment that's almost insignificant but not, because of the circumstances? /doesn't make sense u_u;; like how they can fall into routine even after all they've been through, because they're just that familiar with each other.
it's okayyy I probably wasn't very useful while half-asleep T__T;; and I took so long /hides forever about that. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS ♥!! my only kangteuk fix in what feels like yeaarrs /sobs.
I SWEAR I'LL BE WRITING HAPPY KANGTEUK NEXT ODG i haven't written angst in two years.
I liked how there weren't proclamations of forever or anything over-the-top, and how it was kind of just this day-to-day moment that's almost insignificant but not [...] like how they can fall into routine even after all they've been through, because they're just that familiar with each other. YOU ARE AMAZING DON'T STOP this is exactly what i was aiming for :DDD
YOU WERE VERY USEFUL. EXTREMELY. no it's fine, i understand the post-grad sleep curse is very strong and difficult to break. ♥♥♥
the pub scene seems like it must've been hard to do, but I like how the dialogue makes it seem almost perfectly reasonable for Kangin to get as angry as he did. the Kangteuk argument after and how Jungsu doesn't trust his words anymore were incredibly depressing which I guess is what makes it so good. ;A;
and then the cheerful birthday scene in between that and Kangin talking to Jungsu again fdsklj. felt almost like nothing was wrong and everything was as it was before and throwing cakes into faces is so Suju haha. but then, the following scene. ;~;
Kangin is our brother and friend, and we love him. /sobs
all of Suju coming together to ambush him afterward really gave that statement weight, and I really like how you doled out the lines, how it's very Donghae to blurt out something first and very Kyuhyun to cut Kangin off and how Sungmin is as always the voice of reason kind of? already told you how much I like the extinct thing haha, how it probably sounds all serious in Hyukjae and Donghae's heads but it's also their own weird flavor of talking.
and the last scene and everything kind of mostly working out ;~~; “Oh god,” Youngwoon said, horrified. “Stop it. We’re in public.” ahaha love that Jungsu's finally stopped with his act and these two are kind of back to their silly embarrassing dynamics.
and yeah, the ending is perfect and so very them and I still love thiiiiis and you for writing it. ♥!
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- i really liked the Dead. Like bulgogi line too LMFAO
- this makes so much sense in kind of describing how the relationship between Kangin and the rest has changed YES EXACTLY
- so i think it's your turn to write kangteuk now
- i really do
- i liked that paragraph too! although it made me sad. in fact, A LOT OF THIS MADE ME SAD. but some of it made me happy like, uh, the ending. :|
- I LOVED WRITING THAT GUITAR STRINGS SCENE OK IT MADE ME TINGLE TINGLE
- this scene goes from humorous to angsty happens really smoothly and yet it's incredibly sad IKR LIKE MY HAPPY SCENES NEVER END HAPPILY WHAT IS THIS TRAVESTY
- hyuk is a loser. nuff said
- how Jungsu doesn't trust his words anymore YES this is EXACTLY why youngwoon got so pissed off. i mean, i definitely would
- it probably sounds all serious in Hyukjae and Donghae's heads but it's also their own weird flavor of talking obv because eunhae PERSONIFY WEIRD
- tbh i still feel a bit iffy about the ending. it's just so HAPPY. it doesn't tie in with this fic, which is, like, SAD SAD SAD and then you've got a little happy scene over there. IT IS SO STRANGE
anyway THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO MUCH FOR DOING THE BETA WORK AND STAYING UP THE WHOLE NIGHT TO WALK ME THROUGH THE EDITS AND. SOBS ALL OVER YOU. ♥♥♥
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writing bwuh what is that. u___u have a few ideas floating in my head but they're AU or trainee or other things non-comeback-related. but I'll try! sometime. ;;
a lot of this made me sad too did you see how much I abused ;~; afdlksj. but but yeah it ended happy so \o/! I thought the ending wasn't that out of place, a few of the other scenes before were also really touching and sweet. and it's not an entirely perfect happily-ever-after ending either, because Kangin's answer isn't a definite but a 'not sure' which.. ;__; idk, I liked how there weren't proclamations of forever or anything over-the-top, and how it was kind of just this day-to-day moment that's almost insignificant but not, because of the circumstances? /doesn't make sense u_u;; like how they can fall into routine even after all they've been through, because they're just that familiar with each other.
it's okayyy I probably wasn't very useful while half-asleep T__T;; and I took so long /hides forever about that. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS ♥!! my only kangteuk fix in what feels like yeaarrs /sobs.
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I SWEAR I'LL BE WRITING HAPPY KANGTEUK NEXT ODG i haven't written angst in two years.
I liked how there weren't proclamations of forever or anything over-the-top, and how it was kind of just this day-to-day moment that's almost insignificant but not [...] like how they can fall into routine even after all they've been through, because they're just that familiar with each other.
YOU ARE AMAZING DON'T STOP this is exactly what i was aiming for :DDD
YOU WERE VERY USEFUL. EXTREMELY. no it's fine, i understand the post-grad sleep curse is very strong and difficult to break. ♥♥♥
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:O!! you're writing more kt? yes please~
in that case you succeeded in what you were aiming for so \o/! and, okay. ;; /hiiiiides and wanders away to maybe try writing kt.
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