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the art of freeloading (part three b)

Dec 19, 2011 22:39

the 8d to my lol, ☜♥☞, dana accepts all the blame, blame the weird tags on dana, infinite, fanfiction, dana ridiculous dumb park kyung, danaaaaaa, sungyeol/woohyun, pg-13, christmas christmas time is near, ♥ x ∞ = dalyse

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tulita December 20 2011, 11:16:09 UTC

weeps. this fic is really everything sungyeol/woohyun is to me, their banter, their misunderstandings, their pride, everything. love love love this. :)

tulita December 20 2011, 11:17:41 UTC

oh oh oh and SUNGGYU. and THE GIRLFRIEND/WIFE. sunggyu was perfect to the t. ;~;

mammothcock December 20 2011, 14:13:06 UTC

their pride! it's great you touched on that point -- i really tried to bring that across, especially for woohyun.

i wasn't so sure about bringing sunggyu's romantic life into the plot at first, so i'm really glad you liked it. thank you for your comment!

tulita February 22 2012, 07:51:18 UTC

so i read this again. i mean, i've already read it several times, but it's just as good, if not better, every time! that line about their dicks pressing against each other though, omg i love it hahaha. and every time i do read it, i appreciate sunggyu being woven into this story even more. i don't know if it's just because i really like sunggyu and love everything that happens to him in this fic (well him just getting married), but i think he proves to be a wonderful and well-used... like, comparison? that's not the right word, but just someone else that's not woohyun and sungyeol, so i can i guess put perspective or something like it about the pair ( ... )

tulita February 22 2012, 07:53:31 UTC

ah and the line where's sunggyu's like omg no woohyun, omg i love her, i'm pathetic, etc; my heart weeps a little every time ;;

mammothcock February 24 2012, 16:20:23 UTC

oh man several times? that's crazy! but thank you, it's also incredibly flattering. ;; about the dicks issue, i figured it was a very sungyeol thing to bring up. he seems a lot like a mood wrecker to me, ahaha.

you're right about sunggyu, actually! i used him mostly as a contrast to woohyun -- he's everything woohyun isn't, and so much more successful in life for it (at least that's what woohyun thinks) -- to, like you said, put perspective to the difference between a homosexual relationship and heterosexual relationship in korea.

as a strictly non-vulgar person irl (omitting shit, damn and hell from the list of vulgarities, that is), it's good to know that sungyeol's dialogue isn't stunted by unnecessary expletives, aha. anyway, i tried to make him sound like your typical young male adult, just out of teenage hood and toeing the land of adulthood.

if anything, i think sunggyu is most likely to settle down first. :') he'd be such a sappy husband imo, but only behind his wife's backFJSLFJVS wow that's quite stressful, but extremely ( ... )

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