:O Okay so I spent like more than an hour just finishing this fic. :/ And not only cos I read slow but I savoured every single word of this fic HAHAHA it was beautiful and I really loved the extreme love-hate relationship between the two and the glorious amount of angst and the way Sunggyu tries (and fails) to reason with himself when Woohyun is around and how he can't resist Woohyun and just ARGH. EVERYTHING.
Everything about this fanfic was beautiful and I would re-read the whole thing (including tension comes in all forms) if I wasn't 100% sure I'd be killing 2 hours of my life. I love how you laced everything together perfectly especially bringing in little parts of Tension comes in all forms. This really made my day, thank you. :')
oh dear, i hope that one hour hasn't gone to waste!
the extreme love-hate relationship between the two
i was aiming for a balance between their fluctuating levels of tolerance for one another and how it changes in accordance to the severity of the situation after their ~*kiss*~, so i do hope i managed to bring that across. fskfhj i hope the extremely corny scene at the end made up for all the angst?
THE RETURN OF THE ORANGE UNDERWEAR! thank you for this delightful comment, i'm truthfully a little stunned that you finished this, especially since it just stole one hour of your life. tysm. ♥
i'm not sure if i should accept your love, seeing as how the only thing i did was churn out 11k words of my delusional fantasies on lj. but thank you, i really appreciate it! ♥
So many delicious details. I believe the awkwardness between them during the handjob scene would really happen. This was so cute and ajwogi;haw;rg keyboard smash inducing.
not even close! i'm flattered you would injure your keyboard over the expression of your feelings for this. i imagine hand jobs would be a lot more awkward irl for the both of them! or, idk, it'll probably never happen irl, sadly.
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just. afdkj;fldsja; you're too good to me! 11000 words 11k elyse you wrote that much of a woogyu fic for me. sobs. you're perfect. ?
Frankly speaking, if it weren't for his raging hard-on and the damp sheets, the result of Woohyun's spectacular ability to miss his target, he probably would have had himself convinced that the outrageous acts of affection last night had never happened no amount of imagination could dispel such thoughts. sunggyu is an idiot, obviously. because he totally wants these things to happen. again and again and again.
Sunggyu was reminded vaguely of Woohyun's disgustingly over-confident claims that a Sunggyu could not function without an Woohyun. this is true. sunggyu, y u deny?
"I'm here on an official visit to the toilet," Sungyeol yelled back. "It's urgent!" HE IS SO PERFECT OMG CAN I MARRY YOUR SUNGYEOL AND LOVE HIM ALL OVER OMG I WANT ONE!!!!!!! 8DDDDD an official visit dying he's such a brat i love him elyse.
Sunggyu closed his eyes and tilted his head back against the shower's spray, drowning out
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That is the exact reaction I made upon reading the last three words. Or, the best literary representation I could come up with.
THIS. YOU. THIS. LJ BEING A FRENCH WHORE AND TRYING IT'S DAMNDEST TO PREVENT ME FROM READING THIS. FUCKING RUSSIAN GOV TERRORISTS THEY BETTER NOT HAVE STRUCK AGAIN GAAAAAH I CAN DIE HAPPY WITH THIS FRESH IN MY MIND.
Omgyu. Where do I even start? Can I even? I don't. What. Where is my coherency.
The. You. And. Woogyu. I just. GHOILKWEHIOLKJDEHWIODLKJW. OKAY. I can do this.
The writing. The words. The details. The characterization. I can't. UGH I'm so frustrated by my inability to properly convey the level of epic this reached ಥ⌣ಥ my eyes bleed with beauty.
Gosh. Forbidden-fruit/bi-polar/manipulitive/seductive/inappropriate!woohyun. Just. Woohyun. And jfc Leadergyu. All anxiety and overanalyzing and dictatorship and lust and RAWR MUST PERFECTION I HAVE and just fuck. I have no
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Okay so I spent like more than an hour just finishing this fic. :/ And not only cos I read slow but I savoured every single word of this fic HAHAHA it was beautiful and I really loved the extreme love-hate relationship between the two and the glorious amount of angst and the way Sunggyu tries (and fails) to reason with himself when Woohyun is around and how he can't resist Woohyun and just ARGH. EVERYTHING.
Everything about this fanfic was beautiful and I would re-read the whole thing (including tension comes in all forms) if I wasn't 100% sure I'd be killing 2 hours of my life. I love how you laced everything together perfectly especially bringing in little parts of Tension comes in all forms. This really made my day, thank you. :')
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the extreme love-hate relationship between the two
i was aiming for a balance between their fluctuating levels of tolerance for one another and how it changes in accordance to the severity of the situation after their ~*kiss*~, so i do hope i managed to bring that across. fskfhj i hope the extremely corny scene at the end made up for all the angst?
THE RETURN OF THE ORANGE UNDERWEAR! thank you for this delightful comment, i'm truthfully a little stunned that you finished this, especially since it just stole one hour of your life. tysm. ♥
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I love you.
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So many delicious details. I believe the awkwardness between them during the handjob scene would really happen.
This was so cute and ajwogi;haw;rg keyboard smash inducing.
Thank you for this, I love it. ^^
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thank you for your comment, it is lovely!
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Thank YOU for writing this. ^^ It's really fab.
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there will be a more coherent comment after i'm done with class :3 ♥
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your comment is logical enough! happy birthday, i hope you're having a good day. ♥
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Frankly speaking, if it weren't for his raging hard-on and the damp sheets, the result of Woohyun's spectacular ability to miss his target, he probably would have had himself convinced that the outrageous acts of affection last night had never happened no amount of imagination could dispel such thoughts. sunggyu is an idiot, obviously. because he totally wants these things to happen. again and again and again.
Sunggyu was reminded vaguely of Woohyun's disgustingly over-confident claims that a Sunggyu could not function without an Woohyun. this is true. sunggyu, y u deny?
"I'm here on an official visit to the toilet," Sungyeol yelled back. "It's urgent!" HE IS SO PERFECT OMG CAN I MARRY YOUR SUNGYEOL AND LOVE HIM ALL OVER OMG I WANT ONE!!!!!!! 8DDDDD an official visit dying he's such a brat i love him elyse.
Sunggyu closed his eyes and tilted his head back against the shower's spray, drowning out ( ... )
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That is the exact reaction I made upon reading the last three words. Or, the best literary representation I could come up with.
THIS. YOU. THIS. LJ BEING A FRENCH WHORE AND TRYING IT'S DAMNDEST TO PREVENT ME FROM READING THIS. FUCKING RUSSIAN GOV TERRORISTS THEY BETTER NOT HAVE STRUCK AGAIN GAAAAAH I CAN DIE HAPPY WITH THIS FRESH IN MY MIND.
Omgyu. Where do I even start? Can I even? I don't. What. Where is my coherency.
The. You. And. Woogyu. I just. GHOILKWEHIOLKJDEHWIODLKJW. OKAY. I can do this.
The writing. The words. The details. The characterization. I can't. UGH I'm so frustrated by my inability to properly convey the level of epic this reached ಥ⌣ಥ my eyes bleed with beauty.
Gosh. Forbidden-fruit/bi-polar/manipulitive/seductive/inappropriate!woohyun. Just. Woohyun. And jfc Leadergyu. All anxiety and overanalyzing and dictatorship and lust and RAWR MUST PERFECTION I HAVE and just fuck. I have no ( ... )
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