Fanfic: Principles & Principalities

[mamazano]

Principles & Principalities

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“William! Look around you. What do you see?”

“Nothing.”

“Why, that’s not quite true, is it now? There is more than nothing. In fact, there is quite a bit of something. The

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[giselleslash]

Oh, that is incredibly sweet in Jack's very roundabout way *g*

And I can just see Will standing there looking at Jack with that adorable little furrow between his brows as he waits for Jack to get to the point :)

[mamazano]

Jack does have his moments, as circular as they may be.

And Will, bless him, he does get all wrinkly when trying to make sense of Jack.

Thanks for the sweet comment.

[sharklady35]

Vintage Jackspeak.

[mamazano]

Thank you! Best compliment, ever.

[were_lemur]

Jackliest. Proposal. Ever.

[mamazano]

Jackliest. Love it. Jack is superlative.

[veronica_rich]

D'awwwww.....

Damn, I hate when I make a comment like a girl.

But it is adorable. I love Jack wanting to get Will alone - sort of - to propose, for all intents and purposes. And making sure he can't get away!

[mamazano]

Thanks. Didn't mean to bring the girly-girl out in you. :P

I think Jack's objective was to take Will somewhere that was far removed from society's rules and stigmas, in order to make his point. The fact there was no where else to go, seeing how they were already nowhere, just helped matters along.

[stealmybike]

What a sweet and wonderful way to cheer someone up! Loved the dialogue in this, it's very Jack CotBP kind of speak. :)

A bit of housekeeping: "That were just an observation." I think you meant "was" rather than "were" unless it was purposeful.

Great work :)

[mamazano]

Thank you. It was the boys doing the cheering, I was just playing stenographer.

And yes, that was deliberate. Talk like a pirate and all that...