The Proposition, for thilia

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Title: The Proposition
Gift for: thilia
Author: riot_grrrl_ria
Characters/Pairing: Charlie/Lucius, Charlie/Narcissa, mention of Lucius/OMC, and passing reference to Charlie's sexual exploits in Romania.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2200
Warnings: bondage, cross-gen, elements of dub-con/non-con, humiliation, infidelity, graphic sex, slash
Author's Notes: Many thanks to

Comments

[thilia]

Mmmmmmm, niiiiice, Narcissa :D

An interesting idea, and you've managed to make me feel sorry for all three of them! Well, Charlie most of all, obviously, considering Narcissa only used him for her revenge.

This was exactly how I like my Narcissa; manipulative and smart, and not just silently taking everything Lucius does to her. I also liked the beginning; Charlie and Lucius both wanting to be the one in control, because that's just how I see them :)

Great job. Thank you, Mystery Author! :)

[a_shadow_there]

Thanks! Thrilled to hear that you liked it, and especially stoked that you approve of Narcissa in this - I'd never written her before, so it totally made my evening! :)

[wwmrsweasleydo]

Good fic. Bad Narcissa! What a way to get revenge! I don't feel too sorry for Charlie - he knew what he was getting into and got what he wanted out of it. I liked the technique of switching between the planning and the execution of the plan.

[a_shadow_there]

Thank you! Lovely to hear you enjoyed it. And I'm glad the switching worked well for you, too :)