Flow, R, Remus/Fenrir

[malfoil]

Title: Flow
Author: malfoil
Pairing: Remus/Fenrir
Rating: R
Disclaimer: They aren't mine, they're JKRs.
Summary: Fenrir bites into the skin, where he can taste blood and despair...and it's new.
Warning: Um...a little underaged sex. So if that offends you, you probably shouldn't read this.
Word Count: 850

Comments

Like a dying dog

[anonymous]

Rihgt, this will probably turn some heads, but this reminds me of when I sat and watched my dog die. Don't worry, he had to put down, and a vet came to my house to adminster a lethal injection, and I stayed at sat by him and watched him dying. Nothing morbid-I just liked him so much and wanted to be the last thing he remembers. Like your story, watching him dying was sickening as he was doing just that-dying-but in another way, it was beautiful, not his death, but because he was leacving his pain and suffering. Like your story, it was beautiful and disgusting, disturbing and comforting-for different reasons, but also like watching my dog go through the assumedly strange experience of death to escape the clucthes of pain, it was also compulsive. At some time throughout both events, I felt like turning away-but I couldn't, or did and found myself turning back to watch-or knowing or should, but not being able to; just knowing deep down inside that I have to stop and watch....or read, in this case. ;)

Amazing, deep stuff. As for perversion being good, who's to say what's to say and what's not to say? The lines between good and bad are probably more blurred than some think....I expect the mingle alot too....its just a simple case of what you believe is good or bad-or perverse or not.

-Slyffindor_Smiles; from Restricted. org-a web-site where I got the link to this site from; also a website which I feel you should join as it specialises in Harry potter slash and quite a few people there (including me) are baying (geddit?) for some good clean nasty angsty Fenrir/Remus action. You could be our man/womna....

Re: Like a dying dog

[malfoil]

I've never had to watch any of my animals die. I haven't had many, but they tended to die quietly so I never had to be part of that pain. Death still haunts me though - the idea of it, I mean. I can't imagine what watching your dog was like.

I wanted to tell a story, that was all. I'm not sure if it was perverted or not, but sometimes people are perverted. And not in the sexual way, but in the things they enjoy. Like Fenrir.

Lol, I'm not sure what that site is. I'm still trying to make the changeover from being a reader to actually writing things, so...what's restricted.org? Are there a lot of stories like this on here? How do you get on there? Sorry for all the questions, I'm still sort of new. :/

And thank you for your comments, they were very heartfelt.