Comments | maldoror_gw: DR Ch. 23, part two

maldoror_gw

DR Ch. 23, part two

Mar 26, 2006 19:59

Read part one first!

( DR 23, part two )

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rurounitriv March 27 2006, 03:30:29 UTC

Yeow! What a mess - and I see what took things from being "someone's getting a little nookie where he shouldn't be" into "Major Diplomatic Incident".

And as soon as Lee got chased out of the room I knew there was going to be some fairly nasty bargaining going on. ^^; Tsunade is nobody's fool.

maldoror_gw April 7 2006, 12:12:37 UTC

and I see what took things from being "someone's getting a little nookie where he shouldn't be" into "Major Diplomatic Incident".

That's a relief ^^; I had to work the tone of the 'plot' and rumours for ages to get it where it didn't sound unlikely or too dramatic or not serious enough. As for Tsunade...she rules XD She's one of my favorite female characters.

lynnmonster March 27 2006, 04:02:29 UTC

Hooray! I've been loving this the whole way through, and I think it's great the way the two have been forcibly ejected from their protected bubble of isolated secrecy but still manage to brave Lee's embarassment and Gaara's compromised political position to stay together. (Plus, I laughed like a loon.)

Brava!

sugalesshanghai March 27 2006, 04:23:54 UTC

rofl A diplomatic conversation between Tsunade and Gaara... XDDD But hey, you write a really nice Ibiki! ^^

Such a pity we're nearing the end. ;_; I hate this 'I wanna read the next chapter yet I don't want her to finish it too soon cause that means the end of the story' feeling. >.<

cho_sa March 27 2006, 04:26:44 UTC

OOOOOhh yay! That was just wonderful! I loved Gaara's reactions in this chapter. Not only that he supported Lee but he pushed Tsunade into accepting his terms too.

I can't believe that you're closing up the story though... so sad, only a couple of chapters left huh?

proud_snapist March 27 2006, 04:33:11 UTC

OMG...one of my dreams come to life on the screen! A duking out b/w Gaara and Tsunade!!! For all of Gaara's lack of verbal finesse, he sure is pretty good at getting what he wants no matter what. I loved this story so much. It gave me faith in the Naruto series and made me realize that if it weren't for my other pairing inclinations, GaaLeeGaa would be my OTP. You're a genius! Great work!