Comments | maldoror_gw: Diplomatic Relations, Part Sixteen

maldoror_gw

Diplomatic Relations, Part Sixteen - part 1

Jan 10, 2006 00:28

I'm back! Here's a chapter a lot of people were waiting for, and that I've been sweating blood over for the last two months or more, trying to get it right. Wurhg. I hope you all enjoy. It's about twice as long as the other DR chapters, but I found that the length was needed ( Read more... )

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munky_of_magyar January 10 2006, 07:55:21 UTC

Dead of fangirl Bliss, that resulted in an exploding brain

maldoror_gw January 10 2006, 23:55:06 UTC

*does Fangirl CPR* I can't afford to lose a reader!! Quick! 10cc adrenaline, stat!

PS: Your icon is...hypnotic....0_0

kaigou January 10 2006, 09:16:38 UTC

"You think a tiring, sweaty, dangerous activity will cheer me up."

"It always cheers me up," Lee pointed out.

"Yes, that's why most of this village thinks you're as crazy as I am," Gaara said, turning back towards Sunagakure's skyline.

*dies*

I wasn't sure whether to laugh out loud or just shake my head at the fact that this exchange is so IC it frickin' hurts. Lee, the ultimate romantic, paired with Gaara, the ultimate pragmatist (pessimist?) ... I still can't believe you're doing this to me, let alone in tandem with a 2x5... Sheesh, woman! Have mercy!

maldoror_gw January 10 2006, 23:56:11 UTC

I still can't believe you're doing this to me, let alone in tandem with a 2x5... Sheesh, woman! Have mercy!

Whahahahah!! NO MERCY! *cough* But hey, if the fic can pass your finely tuned IC radar, I gotta be doing something right ^__^

tripoverhercats January 10 2006, 10:19:58 UTC

...That certainly answered a few questions about Gaara's sexuality. He had one, for starters.

Squeak.

Dies.

<3 Loves this so very much, but loves that line utterly.

crazy_toffee January 10 2006, 16:27:28 UTC

I totally agree with you on that line. Best summary ever. XD

maldoror_gw January 11 2006, 00:17:42 UTC

*snicker* says it all, no? Thanks ^_^

maldoror_gw January 11 2006, 00:08:10 UTC

Heeeey, here's a name I haven't seen in awhile ^__^ Welcome welcome!
I see you've moved on to One Piece; I've read that, but I feel no ficcage urge at the mo. Then again, I'm drifting from GW...Pirates AND ninjas make a cool combo, methinks :P

And yes...the question of Gaara's sexuality deserved to be raised (and stroked, and- um, I'll cut out the innuendos).

Thread 5

jade_dragoness January 10 2006, 15:34:31 UTC

Lee's naivety with what Gaara wanted made me grin in a very delighted manner......I'm such a perv.
This:
"The scar tissue you've accumulated is displeasing. You need to work on your defence. But your body...particularly your shoulders and arms...you have strength, power and endurance; you can actually challenge my combat abilities. When you move, it draws and holds the eye like a well-balanced weapon. I fail to see what's amusing about that."

Had me muttering "Damn, straight!" at the computer screen as I nodded my head so hard it threatened to fall off.

*melted puddle of incoherent goo*

maldoror_gw January 13 2006, 00:34:38 UTC

Glad I melted you ^_~ We've had Lee drooling over Gaara since chapter 2, so I thought it was time to show that Gaara also likes Lee's physique. For purely Gaara reasons, of course :P But valid reasons nonetheless!

proud_snapist January 10 2006, 23:49:10 UTC

"Lee's internal alarm blared. That 'Who?' wasn't an offer to listen to Lee's old woes. That 'Who?' wanted a name, an address and an estimate of the target's defences."

LOVED this line.

It's so completely Gaara that I almost fell off my chair laughing and gushing.

maldoror_gw January 13 2006, 00:35:49 UTC

*makes V sign* Glad you liked that line, it's one of my favorite in the fic :P I could just imagine some of Lee's childhood bullies suddenly feeling a cold shiver going up their spine for no reason they could figure out...