Paragraph 1: rifle A man that feels that deep, don’t last long either, he sits down to wait for death or he ends it all to the sound of guilty recriminations from all those he imagines he’s killed.
Paragraph 3: His faith is why he’s doin’ it all, an' it carries ‘im enough to stand his ground and just do it... the hard thing.
New I should have sent you the final copy but I trusted word to know if I'd made any huge mistakes...what was the change to be made in Paragraph 3... Sid
Oh, love, love, love it! Damn, I wish Joss did a scene like that in BDM, even though the subtext was good enough. And, River/Mal/Serenity, can you say my favourite OT3? Because it is so much, I'm trying my hand at it right now and such! Greatness!
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A man that feels that deep, don’t last long either, he sits down to wait for death or he ends it all to the sound of guilty recriminations from all those he imagines he’s killed.
Paragraph 3: His faith is why he’s doin’ it all, an' it carries ‘im enough to stand his ground and just do it... the hard thing.
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Thank you for reviewing it means a lot!
Also, please send any Mal/River/Serenity to the list when you get a chance...I am in withdrawls already having read most of what is out there.
My beta, gwenfrewi72, turned me on to some last night I hadn't read before and soon that will be finished though...LOL
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Well what do you know! We're making a three-shippers' OT3, see? And *damn* if it's not hot.
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