OMG YES! When chapter 252 came out, I immediately thought about how "obsolete" your fic would be and I loled at the timing, but I couldn't say anything because... yeah...
But I knew the hidden side to your flailing that week. I knew. XD
This piece reads more smoothly this time. And the part about Tsuna's resolution to bring the kiddies back in the picture is similar to the latest chapter this week (hello, TYLTsuna). I know it's not easy to get out of your comfort zone of Gokudera and/or Yamamoto, but I think you pulled it off very nicely.
did anyone manage to spot me in the guessing round? I would like to think that I would if I were allowed to. You're the only one who used the dividers in that round (now that I think about it, you should've been easily recognizable based on that alone) and you're the only one (that I recall off the top of my head who used dividers in your other fics). So based on that as well as this
He is nineteen when he first meets Byakuran, young, naïve, and not a little enthusiastic, having just completed
( ... )
THERE WAS FOREHEAD SMACKING LIKE YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE. Sometimes life just isn't fair. XDDD
Yeah, I definitely didn't make much of an attempt to disguise myself at all. I noticed right off the bat when skimming through the other submitted fics that mine was the only one with dividers; between that and the fact that I used the exact same past/present back-and-forth narrative style that I used in Rationale, and I was pretty sure I was transparent.
Haha, the sad thing is I actually tried to change that sentence you mentioned to make it sound less like one of the sections in one fic... only to apparently wind up making it sound more like that part you quoted from an entirely different fic. XD Well, like I said, I really wasn't trying to disguise much. :P
Ah, well. Guess there's no way to predict what others are thinking or how far back they'll dig through your fics (when I "researched," I only took the three most recent ones in KHR + one in another fandom).
I am so excited for the new theme like burning. :D
Well, you did pretty well when it came to identifying everyone, so I guess that method was pretty effective. I wonder if anyone did actually guess me right; I thought about asking for my stats, but decided not to. XD
ME TOO. The only problem is that unlike this round, I have no clue what to write and way too many ideas. But man, it's going to be so much fun seeing what everyone comes up with. :D
;A; shouichiiishouchishouchishouchidfjasgdadsg /shuts up okay, so -- I have to say I didn't really try to match authors to fics this round, but I should have known it was yours...I mean, playing with theories, Shouichi...and those dividers XD man. And I did wonder how the writer of this fic must have felt when the chapter was up XD /pats. But loved reading this all the same, your portrayal of TYL Tsuna is just so...ahh ♥, his gentle command over everything, and that talk about bringing in their younger selves was really optimistic and saddening. You can just feel his regret. OH. AND THE INTERACTION BETWEEN SHOUICHI AND BYAKURAN ;w; lol I had to google the floriography for forsythia sfadhskjgaa The end of the choice game had me wibbleing, the tension between them is unbelievable and you really nailed that ♥
Yeah, like I said above, I really didn't do much to disguise anything. I THOUGHT I WAS PRETTY BLATANT. XD
And I did wonder how the writer of this fic must have felt when the chapter was up XD
INDEED. XD
Yaaaay, really glad you liked it. Especially the portrayal of TYL!Tsuna; I really wanted to do him justice. And that's just the sort of reaction I was hoping for with the Byakuran/Shou interaction. |D BASICALLY THIS COMMENT MADE MY DAY. ♥
Actually it's not that far off from chap252, so don't worry too much. ^^v Even with the new information, all of this still falls into place in it, which is so cool.
And reading this helps me with my own little fic, thank you!
The fact that Shou wiped his memory in canon helps keep his interactions with Byakuran still relatively close to canon, but all the details about TYL!Tsuna from chapter 253 (his first meeting with Irie, the fact that he planned his own not-death, etc.) kind of shot most of the scenes with him deep into AU territory. XD But I'm glad it doesn't fall too far from the manga version.
It's okay. It's not to far from the new revelation. :)
It's good either way. I'd imagine it's not easy for Shou-chan. And I just like how he compares Tsuna and Byakuran in their similarities and differences.
Lol, I guess. XD Probably the biggest plothole is the fact that we now know Tsuna didn't actually die. But I'm glad you liked it either way! Thanks so much for the comment. ♥
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But I knew the hidden side to your flailing that week. I knew. XD
This piece reads more smoothly this time. And the part about Tsuna's resolution to bring the kiddies back in the picture is similar to the latest chapter this week (hello, TYLTsuna). I know it's not easy to get out of your comfort zone of Gokudera and/or Yamamoto, but I think you pulled it off very nicely.
did anyone manage to spot me in the guessing round?
I would like to think that I would if I were allowed to. You're the only one who used the dividers in that round (now that I think about it, you should've been easily recognizable based on that alone) and you're the only one (that I recall off the top of my head who used dividers in your other fics). So based on that as well as this
He is nineteen when he first meets Byakuran, young, naïve, and not a little enthusiastic, having just completed ( ... )
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Yeah, I definitely didn't make much of an attempt to disguise myself at all. I noticed right off the bat when skimming through the other submitted fics that mine was the only one with dividers; between that and the fact that I used the exact same past/present back-and-forth narrative style that I used in Rationale, and I was pretty sure I was transparent.
Haha, the sad thing is I actually tried to change that sentence you mentioned to make it sound less like one of the sections in one fic... only to apparently wind up making it sound more like that part you quoted from an entirely different fic. XD Well, like I said, I really wasn't trying to disguise much. :P
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I am so excited for the new theme like burning. :D
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ME TOO. The only problem is that unlike this round, I have no clue what to write and way too many ideas. But man, it's going to be so much fun seeing what everyone comes up with. :D
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It kicks ass. I love everything.
I would make a more coherent comment but my brains cells are demanding sleep.
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And I hope you got some sleep orz.
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;A; shouichiiishouchishouchishouchidfjasgdadsg /shuts up
okay, so -- I have to say I didn't really try to match authors to fics this round, but I should have known it was yours...I mean, playing with theories, Shouichi...and those dividers XD man.
And I did wonder how the writer of this fic must have felt when the chapter was up XD /pats. But loved reading this all the same, your portrayal of TYL Tsuna is just so...ahh ♥, his gentle command over everything, and that talk about bringing in their younger selves was really optimistic and saddening. You can just feel his regret.
OH. AND THE INTERACTION BETWEEN SHOUICHI AND BYAKURAN ;w; lol I had to google the floriography for forsythia sfadhskjgaa The end of the choice game had me wibbleing, the tension between them is unbelievable and you really nailed that ♥
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Yeah, like I said above, I really didn't do much to disguise anything. I THOUGHT I WAS PRETTY BLATANT. XD
And I did wonder how the writer of this fic must have felt when the chapter was up XD
INDEED. XD
Yaaaay, really glad you liked it. Especially the portrayal of TYL!Tsuna; I really wanted to do him justice. And that's just the sort of reaction I was hoping for with the Byakuran/Shou interaction. |D BASICALLY THIS COMMENT MADE MY DAY. ♥
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And reading this helps me with my own little fic, thank you!
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And thank you! :)
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It's good either way. I'd imagine it's not easy for Shou-chan. And I just like how he compares Tsuna and Byakuran in their similarities and differences.
Well done! :D
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