Reborn! fic - Laughter Penetrates

[makeste]

Wrote this for this week's khr_drabble challenge. Not too sure about this because I think my drabbles are all starting to sound the same, BUT WHATEVER.

Sorry if the cross-posting crowded up anyone's f-list, btw. XD

Title: Laughter Penetrates
Challenge: 005: Silence
Rating: G
Word Count: 462
Characters: Tsuna
Warnings: Spoilers for the Future Arc.
Summary: A

Comments

[crazyweirdo17]

That was so...real. It's exactly what I imagined Tsuna would be thinking. Nice job. :D

[makeste]

Thanks! ♥

[teruame]

Right-on for Tsuna's point of view. :D It's great to be able to see fanfics written about Tsuna that go into the serious side of things.

Congratulations.

[makeste]

Thank you! And I'm glad you thought the Tsuna POV was good. :)

[waterbaby12us]

Wow, it's totally like what Tsuna would think! Very good job done!

[makeste]

Haha, I'm glad the characterization was decent. Thank you! ♥

[sandrock]

It's so easy to connect this with the canon as we know it, so believable when it comes to the character in question. It definitely seems like the kind of thing Tsuna would think about in his situation, which is one of those things that makes a clumsy kid with poor self-esteem and bad grades a great leader. His selflessness and humility are captured really well here. Thank you for sharing! I really enjoyed this. :)

Also, the last line is awesome. The first time I was reading it, I somehow read it as 'he's thankful he isn't able to shake the uncertainty', as if we're assuming that he is holding himself accountable to it. The next time I read it, I read 'he's thankful that he isn't alone', which is equally powerful. I like both ideas, actually. Chalk one point up to my poor reading comprehension, hehe.

[makeste]

|DDD Thank you. ♥ That's pretty much exactly what I was trying to hit with the characterization so I'm really glad it was on target.

Heh, as for the last line, I had some trouble with its ambiguity (couldn't for the life of me figure out how to word it so that it was specific but didn't lose all its oomph), so I'm glad you like both potential meanings. The second one was what I originally intended, but hopefully this means that even if people read it differently it'll still work out. But it definitely comes down to poor writing more than poor comprehsion; whoops. XD

[dame_batsie]

Totally hit the nail on the head in terms of Tsuna's characterization. And it's just the perfect length too. *thumbs up*

[makeste]

Thank you! |D Really glad you thought Tsuna was IC. ♥