Reborn! fic - Dieci Anni

Feb 14, 2008 04:28

Title - Dieci Anni (Ten Years)
Author - makeste
Rating - PG
Characters/Pairings - Gokudera, gen
Warnings - Spoilers for the Millefiore arc.
Summary - At age 14, he still has hope. At age 24, his hopes have turned to failures.

Ten years pass in an instant and a poof of smoke )

reborn (the series), fic, gokudera

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kiku February 14 2008, 04:41:26 UTC
G-Guh, this was beautiful. I loved it.

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makeste February 14 2008, 17:18:02 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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magical_poof February 14 2008, 04:46:00 UTC
Oooh! I really liked this! The contrast bewteen the two ages is very nicely done!

(Though I wonder where all the TYL people go... surely they don't go back to the past, right? I mean, if they were, there'd be TYL!Tsuna's body lying around in the street. o_o Plus they could just fix it themselves if they were in the past... But whatever. It's still a nice fic)

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makeste February 14 2008, 17:23:42 UTC
Thanks! I tried to show both contrasts and similarities, so I'm glad it worked out well. :)

And I think they must all end up 10 years in the past, since we know that's what happens with Lambo? I'm guessing that in the case of people who are dead, they just don't show up at all (as in Reborn's case). But yeah, they theoretically could just fix it themselves if they were stuck there, couldn't they? I wonder if the manga will ever mention that down the line. XD

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makeste February 14 2008, 17:27:25 UTC
Thank you! I always worry over characterization, so I'm glad it worked for you here. :)

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arisuesei February 14 2008, 05:05:24 UTC
Nicely written. I'm not really fond of Gokudera, but I love your fic. Hope to see more from you.

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makeste February 14 2008, 17:28:46 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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pineapple_nappo February 14 2008, 05:16:27 UTC
Wah~! Pure ♥ Great job!

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makeste February 14 2008, 17:29:02 UTC
Thanks! ♥

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