Fanfic and request for constructive criticism
Title: A Wishful Fancy
Creator: alias_sqbr
Info: Leliana/Morrigan, Zevran/m!Mahariel, past Morrigan/m!Mahariel, some sexual references, 8711 words.
Summary and/or notes:Morrigan and Leliana realise they have more in common than they first thought.
A lot of DAO fic is about extrapolating the character's feelings etc during the events of the game. Writing this fic I tried to imagine an AU version of the game which allowed Leliana and Morrigan's romance algorithms to interact with each other, and then extrapolated from that. Thus, a LOT of the dialogue is copied or adapted from the game, though the context is often a bit different.
This is the first romance-type story I've really written so I am VERY open to constructive criticism.
(Also: I guess it makes sense that this comm has no m/m tag, but it would have been useful :))
Creator: alias_sqbr
Info: Leliana/Morrigan, Zevran/m!Mahariel, past Morrigan/m!Mahariel, some sexual references, 8711 words.
Summary and/or notes:Morrigan and Leliana realise they have more in common than they first thought.
A lot of DAO fic is about extrapolating the character's feelings etc during the events of the game. Writing this fic I tried to imagine an AU version of the game which allowed Leliana and Morrigan's romance algorithms to interact with each other, and then extrapolated from that. Thus, a LOT of the dialogue is copied or adapted from the game, though the context is often a bit different.
This is the first romance-type story I've really written so I am VERY open to constructive criticism.
(Also: I guess it makes sense that this comm has no m/m tag, but it would have been useful :))