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Part 10 - Screw You, We're From Texas

Aug 12, 2010 12:06

( PART 10 )

bb2010, fic, j2

Comments 343

yamisadomazo August 20 2010, 17:38:00 UTC

OMG. This was epic. seriously.

yamisadomazo August 20 2010, 17:44:15 UTC

FIRST?!?!?! YES! XD

Okay, I loved the progression of the Boys' relationship. I was in pain right along side Jensen when he went through with the marriage and was miserable. My heart was in my throat the whole time.

But everything worked out! I'm glad you didn't make the ex-wife out to be a bitch, you know? A lot of the time, writers will side completely with the boys, caught up in their epic love, and not stop to realise that the woman left behind has to be hurting, and that doesn't necessarily make her a bitch.

But this story was perfect, and realistic, and the way that you wove Jensen's sessions with Elise into the overall story was fantastic.

I am memming this immediatley. Epic job. *applause* ^_^

makeit_takeit August 25 2010, 03:22:11 UTC

Thank you so much, and I'm so glad you liked it!

vicdesty August 20 2010, 18:07:50 UTC

Wow, this is AWESOME!!! I loved how wonderfully complete you were with the boy's relationship. From beginning to end the interactions between the boys as well as friends and family was so realistic. I also love the fact, that while family and friends may not have been thrilled, there was no bashing or disowning. Just people, trying to find their way. I'm downloading the pdf version as I write this. This story is a keeper for the ereader.

makeit_takeit August 25 2010, 03:23:28 UTC

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.

sigrundora August 20 2010, 18:41:42 UTC

Thank you. I really liked this. I liked how they became friends first and all their friends and their issues with telling friends and family.
LOL at the names Harley and Sadie used to have :)
This story was sort of bittersweet there at one time, but thankfully it turned into "happily ever after" :D

Thank you :D

makeit_takeit August 25 2010, 03:24:31 UTC

Thanks for sticking with it long enough to make it to HEA :D And for taking the time to comment!

slightlysatanic August 20 2010, 19:29:27 UTC

Okay...this is SO GOOD, I don't even have words.

makeit_takeit August 25 2010, 03:25:26 UTC

Thank you, so glad you liked it!

dr_ducktator August 20 2010, 19:42:58 UTC

I loved reading the chapters when they're finally happy and together. It was so sad seeing them so sad! This was a great story!!!

makeit_takeit August 25 2010, 03:26:11 UTC

Thanks for sticking with it through the sad and making it to the happy :D I'm glad you liked it!