Oct 16, 2006 16:43
I've got a question for anybody who's been reading "Somewhere in Between", or any of my fics, I guess. I've been getting reviews at FicWad (shocking, I know) from a reviewer who thinks my paragraphs are too big and she says she has trouble reading them and thinks I should make the paragraphs shorter to make it "easier to read". What do you guys think? I tend to think my paragraphs are too short sometimes, although a few of them can be a bit big. Question is, are they too big, or does she just need to get a longer attention span? Honest opinions will be appreciated, it won't hurt my feelings one way or another, promise. So, what do you guys think?
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