Something that I wrote (Revised Version 2)
On one sunny day, I saw a small brown bunny running around our in our big garden. It keeps running around the bushes, then it stops and pick a small walnut that fall from a big walnut tree. I am so focus that I didn't saw my mom's coming. My mom, who is small, fat and had a curly hair, told me that the bunny is my dad's present for me from his travel abroad. I am so happy that I went to my mom and kissed her on her cheeks. After thanking her, I went toward the bunny and couldn't resist to touch her and hug her. I named her "Nutsky", based from the moment that I saw her picking up the walnut fruit. I put her down and started playing with her. After a while, I got hungry, I get Nutsky and brought her to the balcony where my family is waiting for me. When I got to my seat, my dad asked me if I liked my gift and I said "Yes, I liked them so much". He reminded me that having a pet makes a great responsibility, I had to clean them and there shelter, I had to feed them and make sure that they are healthy everyday. I said that I will take good care of Nutsky and I understand all the responsibility of having her. Dad added that if he is satisfied on my work, he will have another surprise for me on his next travel abroad. In my happiness, I come to him, hug him tightly and said "Thanks Dad. I love you!"