The Transformation of Ducklings 4/? (HP)

[magstopia]

TITLE: The Transformation of Ducklings 4/?
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: Rose Weasley-Granger and Scorpius Malfoy aren't about to let decades of enmity between their fathers get in the way of their friendship. As two shy, awkward teenagers wrestling with the onset of first love, they've got enough obstacles to overcome.
NOTE: Thanks, as ever, to katieay, for her

Comments

[shyshutterbug]

I haven't a clue why I haven't commented after four freaking chapters on this fic, but you're turning out another brilliant one here. I've read a few Rose/Scorpius fics thus far, some of them quite good, but this one inches ever closer to the best. Can't wait for the next installment :)

[magglenagall]

You haven't reviewed before? I could have sworn you had. Oh well. I'm just glad you did now. :-) I'm hoping to write/post the next chapter in about a week, since this one turned out to be longer than I'd originally envisioned.

Lovely!

[anonymous]

this was absolutely fantastic! I just squee at the thought of scorpius being shy... :) anyway, please please continue very soon!

Re: Lovely!

[magglenagall]

Wow, thank you! I'm very glad you liked this. I hope to have the next chapter up in about a week, so stay tuned.

[shortysc22]

Wow! I love this story and I love how you've characterized Rose and Scorpius and I eagerly await the next chapter. What will Scorpius say to Rose's invitation?

[magglenagall]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this. I really appreciate the review. You should find out Scorpius' reaction--and his response--before too long. :-)

[heartheflowers]

I feel for poor Scorpius. Thanks for updating this fic!

[magglenagall]

I feel for Scorpius, too. He's a good kid with a huge burden to carry. Luckily for him, he's got Rose on his side. Thanks for reviewing!

[author_by_night]

You know, it took me four chapters to realize you're Mags.

You silly sock! *Throws sock at Magnolia Mama* ;)

(Just kidding, you're not a sock.)

On a serious note, I really like this so far. You haven't made them carbon copies of Hermione and Draco - rather, they are their own, fleshed out characters. And I adore adult! Ron and Hermione.

Grazia is also a cool character. I was wondering if she'd be a bit of a Narcissa, but while it's clear she definitely enjoys her wealth, she's also a neat lady.

Looking forward to more!

[magglenagall]

Hee. I'm a woman of many facets. :-)

I'm so glad you read this, but even more than you enjoyed it. One of the aspects I've enjoyed most about writing it is finding the right balance in my next-gen characterizations--I want readers to see the parents reflected in their children, but still show the children as unique personalities.

Thanks so much for reviewing!