Phew!! You think its alright???I tried so hard to make it a happy ending but Jared just stepped out in front of that car.....Im so dead when di catches me!
I think it is perfect! This one was suppose to end sad. I thought it would end with them not getting together and one or the other commiting suicide and the other following as soon as they found out. Your way was MUCH better. Much more of a jolt.
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I thought it would end with them not getting together and one or the other commiting suicide and the other following as soon as they found out.
Your way was MUCH better. Much more of a jolt.
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