I love this and the last story so much. You have captured Merlin and Arthur so well, excellent dialogue, very much in character. I like Percy, he's sweet. Moreover, both stories are very well written. Great job.
I really hope you'll write more in this series. You've given yourself lots of options - hunting, the tournament, a visit to Percy's father's lands with bear-hunting and possible monsters. It would also be cool to see Percy as a warrior, rather than just a sweet young man, how Arthur would train him, his friendship with Merlin. This could be an excellent series, if you choose to continue. Otherwise, I look forward to your other stories.
May I friend you so I can keep track of your new fic? No need to mutual friend, I don't do much with my lj except post the occasional SG-1 fic. On which subject, do you ever write DueSouth or SG-1? My two other fandoms, with Merlin.
Hi, thanks for commenting on it - i'm really glad you liked poor Percy so much, he is a bit hopeless at the moment but hopefully if I write more he might improve a little! I have some ideas for at least one more :)
You're very welcome to friend me, I haven't been on Livejournal that long and so have an embarrassingly small number of friends on here, so I always like to meet fellow Merlin fans! Unfortunatly I don't write Stargate or Due South (although I used to watch Due South a LOT when it was on TV). Mainly I write Doctor Who stuff and now Merlin it seems (Merlin fic is scarily addictive).
Thanks! :) I'm so pleased you're enjoying it, I can't believe my original idea for just for a tiny drabble and then it just sort of grew and now there are two (and possibly a third at some point I hope)
Brutus is very special. Or something like that anyway ;) Little did I know when I wrote this one, just how much trouble Brutus was going to cause in the future!
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I really hope you'll write more in this series. You've given yourself lots of options - hunting, the tournament, a visit to Percy's father's lands with bear-hunting and possible monsters. It would also be cool to see Percy as a warrior, rather than just a sweet young man, how Arthur would train him, his friendship with Merlin. This could be an excellent series, if you choose to continue. Otherwise, I look forward to your other stories.
May I friend you so I can keep track of your new fic? No need to mutual friend, I don't do much with my lj except post the occasional SG-1 fic. On which subject, do you ever write DueSouth or SG-1? My two other fandoms, with Merlin.
Thanks for the stories,
Mu.
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You're very welcome to friend me, I haven't been on Livejournal that long and so have an embarrassingly small number of friends on here, so I always like to meet fellow Merlin fans! Unfortunatly I don't write Stargate or Due South (although I used to watch Due South a LOT when it was on TV). Mainly I write Doctor Who stuff and now Merlin it seems (Merlin fic is scarily addictive).
Anyway thanks for reading and commenting!! :)
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Hope you enjoy the sequel as much :)
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[*squees*] ♥
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Thanks so much for your comment!
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