Harry Potter - "All Narrow Jealousies" - Part 1 - James/Lily/Sirius/Remus/Peter - NC-17

[magnus_leo]

Title: All Narrow Jealousies
Author: marseverlasting
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: James/Lily/Sirius/Remus/Peter (various permutations of)
Word Count: 13,501 words
Summary: When Lily discovers she's pregnant, a carefully balanced dynamic begins to unravel between the one she loves, the other one she loves, the other one she loves, and the other one she loves. A fractal

Comments

[ms_worplesdon]

I just love it when you write Lily. And how on earth do you manage to capture that? The bath is killing me. God, you're so intuitive.

Also, I love it when you compare Lily to Venus on the half shell. &hearts

Sirius questioning Remus about music is just love. Gah!

I carried a sword on special occasions. Anyone want to smoke up?

Ah Sirius, why are you so awesome?

"I'm not boring. I wanna go away too."

*wibbles*

"Their relationship was really creepy and I think they were secretly cousins."

*squeals*

"C'mon, we can't be long or they - they'll wonder."

Oh wow, is this illicit? *raises eyebrow*

And Sirius is crying tightly, shoulders barely trembling with sobs, wiping away tears and snot with the back of his hand and trying to compose himself. "Of course I fucking wouldn't."

Oh Sirius!

"I'm always drunk," Sirius replies with a grin. "Aren't you drunk too?"

Stop it. You are driving me to drink and distraction. *is somehow not upset by this*

"Whomever," Remus says, flinching, and then Sirius sucks him off.

OMG!!! Flailing! Great minds and all that! :D

"I'm just trying to do you a fucking favour."

Ouch, Sirius. That's why. :(

"James, I've looked up to you for years. I was - obsessed with you," Peter says in a kind of surreal monotone.

Oh GOD Peter!

And oh! There's more! :D

PS- You get massive bonus points for Sirius singing Mary Poppins. &hearts