Comments | magnavox_23: Fic: "A Is For Absinthia" Gen, Rated: PG

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Fic: "A Is For Absinthia" Gen, Rated: PG

Nov 04, 2014 16:00

Title: "A Is For Absinthia"
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fan fiction, stargate, gen

Comments 16

"A Is For Absinthia" #Stargate fanfic by @adishni campylobacter November 5 2014, 11:06:43 UTC

Absinthe makes the heart grow fonder? ;)

hahahaaa Gotta love that sarcastic Jaffa!

Re: "A Is For Absinthia" #Stargate fanfic by @adishni magnavox_23 November 10 2014, 12:00:06 UTC

Teal'c's sass matures with age. *g*

annieb1955 November 7 2014, 06:27:53 UTC

I absolutely love the dialogue in this. It's so spot on in character and it tells us so much about the relationship between these two. Really loved it.

magnavox_23 November 10 2014, 12:00:55 UTC

I really appreciate this comment, getting the voices 'right' is one of the best things I can hear, thank you! <3

stargatesg1971 November 7 2014, 12:10:51 UTC

Lovely character interaction, nicely done.

magnavox_23 November 10 2014, 12:01:19 UTC

Thanks! :D

aelfgyfu_mead November 9 2014, 00:43:21 UTC

A lot said in a few words-appropriate for these two.

magnavox_23 November 10 2014, 12:02:20 UTC

Very!

sg_fignewton November 9 2014, 10:36:20 UTC

Oh, lovely. Characterization is spot-on here, and I love the unspoken layers.

"You lie poorly, O'Neill" is my favorite line. :)

Thanks so much for participating!

magnavox_23 November 10 2014, 12:02:58 UTC

Thank you so much, gen is a little out of my comfort zone, but it was fun to play!