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magisterequitum

The Visibile Spectrum (Part Two) -Fic-

Feb 17, 2009 21:55

Title: The Visible Spectrum (Part Two)
Characters: Caleb/Cordelia
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1, 826
Summary: Life is sometimes better told through color.
Disclaimer: I do not own Ian nor the mention of Don. I do own the others.
Feedback: Is greatly appreciated.
Author's Notes: The Blue color is connected to the 5th Snow Fic. We get sad in these.

( Color can influence our emotions, our actions and how we respond to various people, things and ideas. )

universe: wavering lights

Comments 12

shanachie13 February 18 2009, 03:48:58 UTC

*hugs* Oh I feel for Caleb and Cordelia. Wow! You did an awesome job! You even managed to almost distract me from Eliot getting a beat down!

Editing note:
have to right to mourn--have the

Other than that, I didn't notice anything else!

magisterequitum February 18 2009, 03:53:32 UTC

*Hugs* Thank you. That is what I was going for. The Black was another color that immediately came to me. Haha. Beat down! Poor Eliot.

Thank you for that catch!

shanachie13 February 18 2009, 04:18:08 UTC

*hugs* Welcome. I really felt for them, especially Caleb in black.

And Blue...too sweet.

Yeah, poor Eliot...normally he's handing out beat downs...but he got one tonight...suffered pretty badly too--couple of broken ribs and a concussion. He still won though! Woot! Best part--the actor he was fighting (Chris plays Eliot) was Chris's best friend from childhood--and the guys had the best time filming it!

Welcome!

magisterequitum February 18 2009, 04:20:01 UTC

I felt for him too. Poor baby. But she took good care of him.

Blue is sweet. It's sad but has an ending that tells that they're really committed to one another.

Aww. Poor Eliot. I do so love him. That's really cool about his best friend. I bet they did have tons of fun.

Thread 5

hope_tang February 18 2009, 03:57:36 UTC

You killed Ian! *wails*

On the other hand... Add me to the list of women who would like a boyfriend/husband as considerate as Caleb is. I love how you show the interdependance of Cordelia and Caleb's relationship; he's not completely whipped by her and she's not a damsel in distress. In your fic, they're partners in life, and that makes me very happy.

magisterequitum February 18 2009, 04:00:25 UTC

I know! *wails with you* I didn't want to. Really I didn't. But I just had this picture of them wrapped up in bed while he was crying. And then I had to kill Ian. He died peacefully at least!

I try hard to make that connection between the two. They're partners and that is true love. They rely on one another and feel deeply for one another.

hope_tang February 18 2009, 04:11:58 UTC

Okay, I can forgive you for letting Ian die of old age (I mean, that's what I did to Alan in my drabble series...even though I never said that.)

You've done a wonderful job of showing that connection. :)

magisterequitum February 18 2009, 04:13:51 UTC

We shall say that Ian just died. Of a heart attack or something else. I mean I didn't have him shot.

Thank you. I really truly love writing these two.

shanachie13 February 18 2009, 11:46:50 UTC

So because I was thinking about it and I had five minutes this morning: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zu1DwGxVTaw

Nothing like beating up/getting beat up by your best friend...even if its faked!

(no idea why--but the link won't go html--so copy and paste.

emmademarais March 1 2009, 02:34:57 UTC

Okay, apparently I missed commenting on this the first time I read it. (I think I need to stop reading at like 1 or 2 or 3AM /hangs head/ because I lose track and get distracted, not realizing I didn't finish what I set out to do ( ... )

magisterequitum March 1 2009, 03:14:37 UTC

That's okay. They're all there so they're not going to run away. I am delighted to see your responses to these.

Green: Ahh, yes. That is the true testiment. Although, I've taken care of my girl friends/best friends when they were sick.

Black: This one was the worst for me to write. Right before the 4th part and the wedding. But this was also one of the first scenes that came to me. It was very powerful in my mind and I just really wanted to do it. Sorry, Ian. I still love you. Caleb is really alone despite her being there. The family that he had died years before and then this tentative new one that he created with Ian is gone.

Blue: Blue is probably the most different. It's just a time in point that I wanted to use to show that they're relationship isn't always perfect and happy. You have fights and you have times when it's just stressful, but you have to work to make it better.

Thank you!