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magikalrhiannon

Fic: Returning To Torchwood Three Part 2 (Torchwood Jack/Ianto M Time Verse)

Apr 18, 2011 08:49

Part 1

( Story here )

fic torchwood, fic: time verse, jack/ianto, fic: returning to torchwood three, kajmere owns me

Comments 24

toshiani007 April 18 2011, 00:06:37 UTC

Loved the story, it was awesome!!!

magikalrhiannon April 18 2011, 02:29:54 UTC

Thanks!

aviv_b April 18 2011, 02:15:30 UTC

This was great! I love you having Martha, Mickey and Donna at the Hub. Though I would have put money on Donna smacking Gwen silly before Jack and Ianto returned.

magikalrhiannon April 18 2011, 02:33:04 UTC

Haha Spoilers! But remember, this is an alternate universe from Torchwood TV!DW TV. This Donna didn't travel with the Doctor and has a few... Confidence issues. Plus, she wants to stay in Torchwood, and Gwen was the leader.

Now though... Now she's not. ;)

remuslives23 April 18 2011, 02:45:08 UTC

Great ending for this verse!

magikalrhiannon April 18 2011, 02:52:11 UTC

I think if I ended it there, kajmere would come after me with a pitchfork! So many left unswered questions!

There'll be other one shots, but a nice return to the Hub, I think.

kajmere April 18 2011, 16:51:56 UTC

I think if I ended it there, kajmere would come after me with a pitchfork!

I WOULD... NEVER!!!

>:)

magikalrhiannon April 18 2011, 22:41:40 UTC

Sure you wouldn't. :o)

bluelilacs April 18 2011, 04:45:12 UTC

Great addition to this verse. I like who you've had join the team. It will be interesting to see how things go from here, especially after the altercation between Ianto and Gwen. Gwen needs to learn that if she keeps trying to push people around, someone is going to get fed up and push back, and then all of her little skeletons come tumbling out. Also, get over yourself! The man said no! Go home to your husband. Next part, please.

magikalrhiannon April 18 2011, 05:48:45 UTC

Poor Gwen. I needed an antagonist! :) At least it's an Alt Verse and now TV Torchwood that I'm dabbling in!

Thank you my dear! I do enjoy writing this verse immensely!

comicinks April 18 2011, 06:36:11 UTC

I kept scrolling down as if doing so would make more story appear! *pout* it's never enough for me. Boys are cute as always, I melted when Ianto said he like to hear Jack say "I love you". Gwen is obnoxious as always and good news I STILL hate Mickey, you got him just right :p I was glad for more Rhi and the kids although the kids ages were uncomfortable for me cause I've never imagined them that old and it's like when actual kids grow up and it freaks you out. I wonder if Mica would actually be into Justin Bieber. I could see it. Anyway, more please :)

magikalrhiannon April 18 2011, 07:20:34 UTC

Haha! Awesome. I'm pleased I kept the characterisation correct then! ;)

I thought of you when I was writing Rhiannon. And I tell you, I researched those little beggars. Do you think I could find out how old they were? No! So I took.a stab in the dark and then Sam pointed out that I'm writing an alt universe to TV Torchwood so I could make then as old as I wanted.

You're the first to comment on the Bieber!!