one of two birthday presents, at least

[magicdragonomg]

Don't worry, I'm writing yours right now, unactive . ಠ益ಠ I want to make it perfect, dammit.

Title: The Weakness, the Precious
Author: magicdragonomg
Fandom: Yu Yu Hakusho
Rating: PG - death
Characters/Pairings: Hiei, Mukuro, Yusuke, Keiko, Kurama, Kuwabara, Yukina; Yusuke/Keiko
Words: 1,326
Genre: gen; character study/death
Summary: Seventy years only came to far

Comments

[meiko_matsui]

Well... That was amazingly depressing. Really well written though. ;~;

[magicdragonomg]

Thank you. Even if it was depressing, I hope you liked it. -offers tissues-

[catkeytiger]

Interesting idea. I'm not really sure Yuusuke would be the sort to follow Keiko to the grave like that, though I admit that he would never stop loving her as his first wife. But perhaps that's just my interpritation of his character.

As for Hiei, I like how you had it that he's just not really in touch with the emotions. It adds that whole "I'm not acutally human" air to him as well as being completely believable given his life history. And him getting scared that Yukina would do what Yuusuke did is a very nice touch.

I just wish there was more Kuwabara, Kurama, and a few of the others in there to see what their take on the events were, but it was focused on Hiei so you're off the hook.

[edwardofthefunk]

new favorite textface EVAR
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it is supreme

[magicdragonomg]

TRUFAX

[magicdragonomg]

Thank you, I'm glad you loved it, and I'm so glad I could write something you would enjoy. <3 I love studying things like that too, so it was an especially interesting and fun concept for me to play with.