To whom it may concern...
Dear YYH fandom and fanfic writers,
It does not make sense for Hiei to have any children - at least, in the past or anywhere close to the present. Where in the hell in his life's story - as being revealed to Mukuro - does he say, "Oh yeah, then I had sex with an apparition and I am now father to daughters/sons"? Nowhere. It's completey out of character, a lame excuse for an OC, and just extremely, extremely bad writing judgement. I said it once before, and now I'll say it again: some fics in the Yu Yu Hakusho fandom give us true writers a bad name. In this case, namely the idiotic proposal that Hiei has children.
In any case, if you're going to write about that shit, prove me wrong. Write it with literacy and elements that aren't cliche, and create an excellent story that's well presented. Show me that Hiei having daughters/sons somewhere in his past is not a ridiculous aspect or one that isn't always badly written. Please and thank you.
The esteemed stabber of your really horribly written fic,
Sabs the Highly Fed Up
It does not make sense for Hiei to have any children - at least, in the past or anywhere close to the present. Where in the hell in his life's story - as being revealed to Mukuro - does he say, "Oh yeah, then I had sex with an apparition and I am now father to daughters/sons"? Nowhere. It's completey out of character, a lame excuse for an OC, and just extremely, extremely bad writing judgement. I said it once before, and now I'll say it again: some fics in the Yu Yu Hakusho fandom give us true writers a bad name. In this case, namely the idiotic proposal that Hiei has children.
In any case, if you're going to write about that shit, prove me wrong. Write it with literacy and elements that aren't cliche, and create an excellent story that's well presented. Show me that Hiei having daughters/sons somewhere in his past is not a ridiculous aspect or one that isn't always badly written. Please and thank you.
The esteemed stabber of your really horribly written fic,
Sabs the Highly Fed Up