Homecoming (10/?)

[maggiemerc]

Title: Homecoming (10/?)
Rating: R (eventually)
Status: In Progress
Author: maggiemerc
Characters/Pairing: Harry/Hermione
Disclaimer: Do not own them. The only profit I seek is an ego boost from good feedback.

Summary: Hermione's back in England after fifteen years abroad. Harry's hunting for a new dark wizard. Ron's anticipating the arrival of a baby.

Comments

[ladybluestar]

Interesting little drama going on here. I think its accurate to portray the Unspeakables this way--they always seemed to be in a grey area.

One critique--"brackish color of hair" makes no sense.

Also, I don't think guys would think of themselves as "emotional". Perhaps "off-balance" would be a better choice.

Still, I really liked the scene with Rookwood.