Fic: Vacation (2/?)

Dec 18, 2010 04:03

Spoilers: Definitely spoilers up to the beginning of Fool Moon, though there may be bits and pieces I've picked up from fandom that creep their ways in.  I apologize for some OOC-ness and the complete fabrication of Lea's character.  I know almost nothing about her, including how to spell her full name.  I also don't really care, since it isn't ( Read more... )

fic, rating: pg

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kaishiro15 December 18 2010, 09:27:15 UTC
Ack. I feel sorry for Harry and Marcone, but mostly for Harry. I feel sorry for Marcone being being with "Hairy" seems to make him happy, but he'll be depressed if he had to give him up even if he didn't show it. Harry is technically a victim of Lea's gifts, but he sort of made Marcone a victim by proxy and it's making him feel guilty.
I know Lea casted that spell to make sure Harry's okay, but despite the fun moments, there's going to be long term consequences that could go either way.

On another note, I like how your Hendricks tries to help his boss give up Hairy because he knows that Marcone will get attached. Also, the playtime moments between Marcone and Hairy were fun to read. Like Marcone giving him a catnip mouse and Hairy clinging on to Marcone's back while he's on the treadmill. :D
Hmm... if Harry does turn back, will he have leftover effects from being a cat? Like the effect of the catnip because that would be hilarious to see. XD

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flit_st_fanfic December 18 2010, 09:59:16 UTC
There's a reason there might be several chapters after he's human again, and not just because he'll have to talk some issues out with Marcone. That's all I'm saying for now ;3

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roseinlove12 December 18 2010, 16:34:32 UTC
Oh, Harry. Why do I have a feeling he's going to do something really stupid with this new knowledge? I really feel bad for Marcone if Harry does disappear in the next chapter. He's already pretty attached-- no matter what Hendricks tries to do to spare his boss.

There was less cuteness in this chapter, but that's a good thing. Some serious moments can really make a fic.

*memories*

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flit_st_fanfic December 18 2010, 17:41:55 UTC
I do not usually have this shit-eating grin when I read reviews. I like keeping people guessing, though, so I'm not going to say anything more than that, even though I am burrrrrning to tell you what happens next :3

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Can't wait to see what happens next bluecimmers December 18 2010, 16:54:23 UTC
Really good story here. Marcone is gonna be so p*ssed!

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Re: Can't wait to see what happens next flit_st_fanfic December 18 2010, 17:42:15 UTC
oh, there will be plenty of angst and anger all around :3

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liseli December 18 2010, 18:20:44 UTC
I'm really enjoying this, thank you for writing it! I look forward to more kitty-Dresden antics.

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flit_st_fanfic December 19 2010, 03:51:29 UTC
Thank you for reading :) There will be at least seven days of kitty-Dresden, and a few of human Dresden as well, when all's said and done.

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flit_st_fanfic December 19 2010, 03:52:30 UTC
*giggles* I'm not sure there will be a real application for that kind of jumping, but it's a hilarious trait for the breed to have. The jungle cat that makes half the breed uses this skill to catch low-flying birds |D

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