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Fic: Jealousy

Jun 12, 2007 01:00

Title: Jealousy
Author: maekala
Recepient: ariestess
Challenge: passion_perfect Sassy Ficathon. Sofia unbuttoning her blouse in "I Like To Watch"
Fandom: CSI
Pairing: Sara/Sofia
Archive: I'm cool with P&P. Any others, please ask.
Disclaimer: CSI is owned by Jerry Bruckheimer and CBS. My only profit from this is the fun I had writing it.
AN: Sorry this is late. I had some ( Read more... )

fic, fic: csi

Comments 16

greenegret June 12 2007, 07:18:17 UTC

I liked this very much - I like that Sara turns it around on Miss Sofia at the end. Good job!

maekala June 12 2007, 20:02:46 UTC

Thank you so much! I didn't want Sara to seem completely stupid to the idea. I'm glad it worked out.

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maekala June 12 2007, 20:04:37 UTC

Thank you! I think Sofia will *definitely* like it. I know I would. ;)

btw...I loved this line, "What she might have once called smoldering looks between herself and Grissom were only moments of gas compared to what she felt when she shared those some glances with Sofia."

I'm glad that worked. It was originally a fart joke, but I decided to reword it. I even considered taking it out. Good to know it worked.

gsrfan7 June 12 2007, 11:21:50 UTC

I was wondering when someone would talk about that scene. Thanks. I loved it. : )

maekala June 12 2007, 20:05:21 UTC

I'm 90% sure that I'm not the only one who has dealt with it, but I'm glad you liked my version. Thanks!

ariestess June 12 2007, 11:28:50 UTC

Oh that was very nice... I like Sara turning the tables on Sofia in the end.

And that "moments of gas" bit? Pricless!

Thank you!

maekala June 12 2007, 20:08:15 UTC

I'm glad it worked for you. I was actually originally going to take it in a completely different direction (sorta harkening back to the use of your sexuality rift between Sara and Catherine) but this one wrote itself instead. I like it better. ;)

And that "moments of gas" bit? Pricless!

I'm glad people are liking this line. I was a little nervous about it when I first posted.

I'm always glad to add to the Sassy goodness. I'm just sorry it was a day late. *looks sheepish*

ariestess June 12 2007, 22:17:47 UTC

What's that saying? It's better late than never, right?

atfm June 12 2007, 17:08:22 UTC

It was a great scene and I love where you took it from there, the interaction was lovely. :)

maekala June 12 2007, 20:08:47 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it!