...Why are there so many FLIES buzzing round the computer?!

May 19, 2004 20:12

I think I just found someplace worse than The Pit -- FULL of terrible grammar, incoherency and only one fic I found worth reading, despite the yaoi connotations.

There were 1 or 2 Hakkai x OCs, a couple Goku x OCs, and one Gojyo x OC I somehow didn't feel like reading. Seemed AU. Had OOC KouxYaone. And it seems so conTRIVED. In the space of one chap, Goj catches the OC from falling from a ladder, sees her in nothing but a bra, lets her see him shirtless (*nosebleed*) and has her love confessed to him. Whoa, whoa, Gojyo, I know you can MOVE, but steady...steady! Oh yes, and weepy!Sanzo appears too. *cringe*

Person also appears to have gone with the Haha no Nukumori theory, ie the child of 2 han'you will be heretic -- golden eyes. S/he also seems to believe babies can laugh straight out of the womb. I really have nothing to say to that.

Going to (try to) submit some fics to Echoes from the West. *crosses fingers*

saiyuki, mary sue, wtf, rant, fangirlism, fanfic

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