Fic Meme
This actually looks really fun and a good way to write things you might not usually, so I snagged it from Fading_spark.
Comment with a pairing and prompt and I will give you one line of fic.Please make sure I know the pairing/characters/fandom and like them, even if only a teeny bit. If you are unsure post the prompt anyway and I will tell you if I don't have ( Read more... )
Comment with a pairing and prompt and I will give you one line of fic.Please make sure I know the pairing/characters/fandom and like them, even if only a teeny bit. If you are unsure post the prompt anyway and I will tell you if I don't have ( Read more... )
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As he watched her get ready for her prom - a vision of beauty in sky blue - he couldn't help wish for her youth. The doorbell rings and she runs to the door, ringlets bouncing, to let in her date. As the boy greets her with a kiss Nathan is shocked to feel jealousy stab through his heart like a knife.
Identity Crisis
Sometimes its so easy to forget that he is her father; especially when they are laid spread out limbs entwined as they are now. He finds it hard to actually pin point what he is to her; father, lover, mentor, protector...so many words could describe their relationship. A relationship that is constantly shifting and evolving and he begins to lose sight of who Nathan Petrelli actually is...of what he is. So he chalks it up as an identity crisis before he kisses her cheek and falls hopelessly into the role of lover.
Fatal FlawIf there was one fatal flaw that he possessed, an achilles heel, that he had to share with the world he would say it was his pride. However, as he sits gulping down amber liquid from behind ( ... )
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Awwww. Poor Nathan in "Prom". I love your little descriptions of what Claire looks like, "ringlets bouncing" and the colour of her dress. Really helps set the scene. Wonderful job. ♥
DUDE, "Identity Crisis" is freaking perfect!! You captured Nathan just perfectly in that moment, and I can really feel his inner confusion, and you can feel how much he loves Claire. God. I love it. *diez*
*revives self for "Fatal Flaw"*
Pride is so a flaw of Nathan's, a huge flaw. God, I have no words to describe how much I absolutely love this last one. It's definitely my favourite of the three. You've captured Nathan perfectly, and again, I love your description of Claire. God, just wonderful.
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR WRITING THESE. You're amazing.
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I'm glad I give good prompts! :D
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You do, your prompts seemed to make it so easy to write the characters they were for. I just tend to give the first random word to pop into my little peanut brain!
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For there is one fatal flaw that he could never share; his love for the girl with the ringlets and bubblegum smile.
Gorgeous! I love that line a lot!
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