Fly On The Windscreen 7/?

Aug 11, 2009 00:32

Title: Fly On The Windscreen
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jenackles82 August 10 2009, 22:52:56 UTC
I loved it!!! Hopefully Tom will be ok soon! And hopefully we'll see some Tom and Clay action! :)

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maddonna001 August 10 2009, 22:58:27 UTC
I'm teasing y'all, aren't I?
two more chapters and then there will be smut, I promise! (okay, so basically two sex free chapters are written) :-F
I'm glad you liked the update, I guess it was pretty obvious that it will happen and more drama is on the way (it's never easy with these two) but this incident really brings them closer.

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insane_songbird August 10 2009, 23:28:19 UTC
Well, Dave is a fucking bitch! *growls* possessive bastard... and so obnoxious! He can be glad that Harry had nothing heavy to swing at him... like an axe, a baseball bat, a machete or a fire extinguisher or he'd be minced meat.
They should just leave! NOOOOW!

*flails helplessly*

B

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maddonna001 August 10 2009, 23:39:09 UTC
2 more chapters and they are leaving town, I promise. And actually, David will be nice in the following chapter, I promise.
Have you ever watched Buffy? There was an episode in the 6th season where Buffy broke up with Spike and things happened in Buffy's bathroom. This chapter was meant to be something like that. Neither of them wanted to rape their lovers, they just became desperate and lost it.I was thinking of having Tom/Harry pick up the fire extinguisher but if David had stayed alive, he would have called the cops, that's for sure.
allright, I'm heading over to your LJ to read your update.

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lovetheguys August 10 2009, 23:54:52 UTC
Whew, what an exciting chapter! Between David nearly raping Clay and Tom/Harry nearly killing David, we had a lot of action!

More ASAP!

Love, Robin

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maddonna001 August 11 2009, 11:32:46 UTC
I'm happy that you still like my fic, even though I keep teasing you all and not getting Tom and Clay together.
Update will be next weekend because my beta is on vacation.

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angels3 August 11 2009, 03:17:37 UTC
Should have let him finish it. That guys a bastard.

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maddonna001 August 11 2009, 11:31:02 UTC
Don't be so hard on him, he helped Tom. And I think everybody would go crazy if a guy like Clay left them :-)
anyway, I'm glad you enjoy reading this fic,thank you for the comment!

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deadflowers5 August 11 2009, 08:01:03 UTC
JÓ!

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maddonna001 August 11 2009, 11:29:48 UTC
ez velős volt.egyet is értek,nekem is pont az a jelenet tetszett :-P

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