The Long Haul

[madders_ahatter]

Scene One

Planet: Unknown

Woodland, late summer

“You dare lay hands on our royal person?”

The 107 pounds of dead weight Daniel had been lugging over his shoulder for the past nine klicks suddenly became very much alive as Princess Ro’Pita regained consciousness. The repeated sharp blows of tiny fists of fury over his left kidney accompanied her cry of

Comments

[madders_ahatter]

Thanks for the encouragement. I'll be posting the rest over the next couple of weeks or so. Always leave 'em wanting more, isn't that what they say?

[milanthruil]

Ooh. This is really good so far. I'm intrigued by what these bad guys have planned for our Daniel and the princess.

Your writing style flows so naturally and envelops the senses.

I really wouldn't have guessed that this is your first SG fic. The characters (or at least Daniel so far) feel like you've been writing them forever.

Simply wonderful. :)

-Katt

[madders_ahatter]

*Blush* Thanks for the kind words, you've made my day! Daniel is a joy to write. I just hope I continue to do them justice

[campylobacter]

The OFC dies in the next chapter, right?