He was a World War II buddy movie kind of guy. Heterosexual, homoromantic, he fucked his wife twice a week with tender dispassion. He dreamed afterwards of friends left behind.
I find your art much easier to connect with, but your writing style, it's off putting at first. I'm used to just messing with the order of words not the words itself, so it's a little hard to get into. But some of your phrases can really get me in the gut from interesting angles, so as a whole I think you're going in a good direction.
in person I read aeveryone's aenergetic reactions.... I have alot tosay,...butIalways give people room,... I can't tell how people react here, did I post too much,
allapologies if I am posting too many comments here.
my write is auditoryandvisuael a hint, an approaching of the singingfields[theviscerael fields ofmemori]
nah, I like hearing from you, don't worry about posting too much. And I think I understand what you're saying about it being easier to comunicate in person.
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and what do you think, honest opinions of mynew writing style?-
though your universe bedifferent, i understand your's..
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I have alot tosay,...butIalways give people room,...
I can't tell how people react here, did I post too much,
allapologies if I am posting too many comments here.
my write is auditoryandvisuael a hint, an approaching of the singingfields[theviscerael fields ofmemori]
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