The Moon - Chapter 7

[mad_stalin_69]

Author: mad_stalin_69
Title: The Moon
Chapter: 7/?
Rating: AU; sci-fi setting; NC - 17;
Pairings: Kaoru/Kyo
Warning: language, angst, character death (!!!), horror, drama and grammar fails;
Beta reader: lurks92
Summary: If they pronounce your name, if you are put on the list, if you are the one who’s been chosen - you have to go. Even if the only thing that is

Comments

[eilonwe2]

oh so now I know why die was acting so strangely. yeah, I can see where kyo's obsession with kaoru would just be this big fat neon-pink elephant in the room.

I think in a way, Kaoru was right in his lie. It was what Kyo needed to keep him sane, and yet that "hope" turned to obsession, to an imagined return of affection that was so much deeper and more strongly felt than reality. And now, all his hopes lay shattered. The one constant thing, he'd had to look forward to has been crushed under the bitter heel of Die's jealousy. And Die seems so fucking cold, so willing to let Kyo just .... blow away on the breeze. Doesn't he realize that with as much shit as kyo's been through that that same urge to say "fuckit" and just take off his helmet and die in the void, might be there again?

the pain of his shattered hope and destroyed love has to make feel like his oxygen is running out and all he wants to do is end it the fuck all instead of waiting to suffocate? But at least Kaoru, seems to feel that pain, seems to understand he might have killed kyo with the truth.

how difficult would it have been for them to allow kyo into their lives even if he was a third person? and yet, yeah it would be really hard to let someone I loved bring a third person into our relationship. It takes a special kind of open mind to allow that.

I'm feeling so bad right now for everyone and I'm really hoping that toshiya can find kyo and maybe .. just maybe .. fuck him into oblivion so he can forget for a few hours how much it hurts just to exist.

[eilonwe2]

oh and PS.... if you don't write more of this I might have to hurt you. just giving you a heads up.

besides I'll bribe you.. cookies, chocolate, even a drabble with the pairing and prompts of your choice. though the only thing I request is that you don't ask me to write heavy violence or rape scenes. thanks.

[mad_stalin_69]

Hey! :) I enjoyed reading all your comments! ^^ You made my morning that day :D ^^ lol
Yes, Kaoru does feel guilty, but he would never choose a friend over his lover :( He's been with Die for six years already..
I will, I will!!! Don't hurt me!!!! :O It just takes me a lot of time to update, I've been busy and had some health problems, so there was barely any time to write :( But I won't abandone this story, I really like writing it ^^
Mmm, cookies ^^ :D