The Moon - Chapter 3

[mad_stalin_69]

Author: mad_stalin_69
Title: The Moon
Chapter: 3/?
Rating: AU; sci-fi setting; NC - 17;
Pairings: Kaoru/Kyo
Warning: language, angst, character death (!!!), horror, drama and grammar fails;
Summary: If they pronounce your name, if you are put on the list, if you are the one who’s been chosen - you have to go. Even if the only thing that is waiting for

Comments

[tcharlatan]

HOMG, this chapter was so... mmmn... -claustrophobic-. Definitely not boring, it just gave the impression of the emptiness and the horrible tight, blank space he has to live in. It feels like a build-up to madness, I think ^_^

(Also, sorry I took so long; I haven't been online much lately, between baking many pies, watching X-Files, and getting my leg tattooed @_@)

[mad_stalin_69]

I found your observations rather... interesting :))) As much as I want to, I'd rather not comment :P I want to keep suspence (if there's any) present in the story :D I hope nobody has a real idea where this is going :P

What a weird combination - pies and tatoos :D lol I'm so jealous you can spoil yourself :O My one week holiday is still a month away :(((((
Have fun :DDD ^^

[tcharlatan]

XD Yes, suspense is definitely present! I'm waiting on the edge of my seat (kind of sideways, at the moment) to see where you're going to go with all this.

Haha, yeah... I have strange passtimes, every now and then. I have to squeeze in tattoo sittings on the weekends, and I've been saving up for it for quite a while, but it's aaalllmmmooosssttt done, so I'm super excited! I'm out of school, so I don't really get holidays anymore...

[mad_stalin_69]

Hope it will be surprising :D I'm worried as it is if this story is any good :D I'm a hopeless perfectionist >_<"

It sounded as if you have lots of free time :P So I wrongly assumed you're on holiday :P I started studying for a short time, so studying and working during summer sucks!! Maybe that's why I finally started this story - I need a distraction and some fun :P lol

[tcharlatan]

So far, I think it's pretty amazing!

XD I remember how that is... I used to take a full-time courseload at my school, while working full-time hours at a job the next city over. I didn't have even a single day off for months at a time ^_^; Now I just work, so I have evenings and weekends to play around.