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mad_jaks

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Jan 22, 2008 09:56

So I read Becky's latest Redux piece this morning and - as often is the case where Becky is concerned - got a bit liberated and wrote something.

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Comments 11

smithy161 January 22 2008, 10:30:47 UTC

Ooooh. This is a very interesting idea! I got a bit lost in the second paragraph, but that could be because it's early (for me).

I really love the bit about the Time Lords having lists of rules on the Master!

mad_jaks January 22 2008, 10:42:21 UTC

I got a bit lost in the second paragraph
It's not because it's early it's because it's one of my loooong run on sentences *apologises*

This be the reason I need betas :D

Don't look him in the eyes. Don't listen to his voice. Don't let him kiss you. I can't imagine what influenced me there ;-)

smithy161 January 22 2008, 11:04:09 UTC

Aaaah, okay. It does make sense if I read it slowly.

And I think the Master is far more dangerous than Captain John. If there's a list for John, there's probably a several volume handbook for dealing with the Master!

mad_jaks January 22 2008, 11:12:36 UTC

there's probably a several volume handbook for dealing with the Master!
Now there's a plot bunny :D

donutsweeper January 22 2008, 15:23:18 UTC

ooooh... eerie and deep.

mad_jaks January 22 2008, 15:34:49 UTC

Will gratefully accept both of those. Thanks :)

_medley_ January 22 2008, 15:39:36 UTC

Oh, wow.

She was supposed to have freed him with it. He'd been very persuasive. Couldn't go without her. She was his, he was hers. They'd be together forever. She'd looked into his eyes and known it was the truth.

Fittingly all it had taken was the chameleon arch to break the spell, though the truth of it still held.

She'll be with him in Utopia. Forever and always his trusted companion, his confidant, his jailer.

OK, so I'm quoting like half of it here, but still. So much love for that. The creepiness of his persuasion followed by the creepiness of what Chantho is compared to what she appears to be -- very well done.

mad_jaks January 22 2008, 15:46:26 UTC

I luff you so much!

The Master always was good at the mesmerising wasn't he? And he was egomaniac enough to have thought it would stick wouldn't he? I mean that's kind of believable right?

_medley_ January 22 2008, 15:51:33 UTC

He would totally have thought it would stick. (I'm convinced he had no idea what being human was actually going to be like.)

fandom_me January 23 2008, 05:54:43 UTC

I love, love, love this. I want to say more but my brain is boiled but LOVE. Especially the end, because ow.

mad_jaks January 23 2008, 07:06:30 UTC

thanks
I'd be more enthusiastic only the news that Heath Ledger has been found dead has knocked me for six