Killing Sara Sidle - Chapter 7

[mad_for_jorja]

They did not speak more than a few words all the way to the hospital and back. She parks in front of the house, walks around the car and helps him out. The doctors gave him a cane and told him try to stay off the foot as much as possible. He limps awkwardly towards the house, unlocks the door and goes inside. Sara follows a few steps behind.

Comments

[anonymous]

So I'm reading this chapter, I scroll down to look at the comments and go "Wtf, where are all the comments?". Now I'm coming out of lurkdom to comment because this page is painfully white and this fic deserves some comments, dammit! :)

I actually thought it was called 'Killing Sara Sidle' because without him she's half-dead, inside anyway. You freaked me out in the last few chapters, I thought you were really making her leave him for good. Then I was confused because in the pairing you said "GSR always and forever".

There were some issues in there with the tense, but that's okay. You were brave for writing it in present tense, I tried that once and it wasn't pretty. Actually it was very ugly and I AM a writer. For a non-writer you did it really well.

I always hear people saying things like "Grissom never seems to love her enough." or "He always puts his job before Sara.". I don't believe that either of those are at all true, and that's one of the reasons I really like the quitting his job and moving to New York to be with her thing.

[mad_for_jorja]

Thanks soooo much for commenting! It's the only fanfic I ever wrote, but I'm totally addicted to reading them.

Yea, and English is not my first language, so I appreciate that you forgave me for the tense issues. And I'm not a writer at all! The only things I've written and published are scientific papers and that is quite different. Yep, I'm a scientist, and CSI is my very guilty pleasure. That is why I like the geeks so much!

Thanks again for your kind words.