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[FANFIC] Breathe

Sep 11, 2010 02:08

Title: Breathe
Pairing: Ohgojima, Nakashi
Rating: ??
Author: macymacymacy
Genre: Friendship, Angst, Slice of Life
AN:
-Suzuka's POV
-OOC?
-lame ending?
-parody. xD

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[a story by a fan], genre: romance, p: nakajima yuto/ohgo suzuka, genre: friendship, : : horikoshi, :au, genre: angst, t: oneshot, p: nakajima yuto/shida mirai

Comments 24

keichii24 September 10 2010, 23:47:22 UTC

waaa ~ poor mirai. xc
great fic!!

macymacymacy September 11 2010, 10:54:45 UTC

:((

thank you so much! :D

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macymacymacy September 11 2010, 10:56:29 UTC

i'm really sorry mirai, but you're meant for yama-chan. /whacked.

thank you!! :D

♥ me too. it's the most memorable scene in the movie i based this story from....

sumi721 September 11 2010, 07:38:29 UTC

This was really good!!
I was blown away.
I really love serious love stories. :D
I just love the ending.
I love Shida Mirai but still this story was perfect! <3

macymacymacy September 11 2010, 10:58:05 UTC

thank you! ♥

i LOVE mirai, too.. maybe that's why it's her i used here. i was aiming for a heartbreaking fic and mirai here... just

blozzom_zone September 11 2010, 09:45:14 UTC

I never read a Yuto/FC before...but this is beatiful<3

Poor Mirai though~

"Missing you isn't the hard part, knowing I once had you is what breaks my heart." ♥

macymacymacy September 11 2010, 11:00:19 UTC

thank you! ♥

:((

♥

crescentharpe September 11 2010, 11:37:33 UTC

I LOVE YOUR CURRENT MUSIC. i didn't know about the version with Colbie Cailat though

/reads

;w; MIRAI!!! why /cries
WHY IS THIS NAKASHI SO DAMN PAINFUL?! look who's talking XD

and it hurts for Ohgo too...

♥

macymacymacy September 11 2010, 12:24:52 UTC

i didn't know there was a breathe by taylor swift not feat colbie calliat! lol. xD this version was great, in the video they looked like twins. XDD

/pats you on the back...
Well, this is life? I wanted to try a Nakashi but Al and co. were fooling around saying lines in One More Chance for the whole week that it got reflected here. /puts blame on them. /bricked

lol

but in the end, yuto chose her.... :')

crescentharpe September 17 2010, 13:17:49 UTC

of course there is! its in her album! (i forgot which LOL)
/watches the one with Colbie

XDXDXD LOL it really affects your writing XDXDXD

i know but it still is painful for Suzuka knowing her best friend will be suffering because of her joy...

macymacymacy September 18 2010, 10:35:10 UTC

/whacked. xD

yeah... haha. my writings are always kinda based on what's happening around me. XD

you're right... so yama-chan should make his move so that mirai would be happy again and yuto and suzuka would also be happy for their best friends. lol. no i don't have any plots for a sequel.

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