Fic: The Edge Of All Our Fears

[mack_the_spoon]

 Hi, all! This is my first Fringe fic. But this show is too awesome not to write for.

Title: The Edge Of All Our Fears
Author: Mack the Spoon
Rating: PG-13 for mild language and violence
Spoilers: “LSD”
Summary: Olivia's POV of her experience inside her mind, and how she comes back.
Disclaimer: I don't own Fringe, its episode plots, or characters.

Comments

[elliestories]

Firstly, yay, another XF person writing Fringe! It's so delightful to see this pop up from you!

Secondly, this was such a great bit of character study on Olivia, and the confusion we saw inside her mind. I appreciated that you were willing to delve a bit into some of the things we were shown, but just as willing to let some of them be a little confusing to Olivia, too.

[mack_the_spoon]

Thanks! I know as an ardent Phile, I was quite antagonistic toward the show when I first heard about it, but then once I succumbed, I had to admit it was awesome. Now I can't live without it! ;-)

And thank you! I love Olivia, and it was interesting to try to figure out what the episode meant to her. I'm glad it worked for you.

[tilden13]

Somehow my favorite thing in this is how you caught her stepfather's ever-present sneer. I saw that in the episode, too--even as a cartoon, he sneered!

Also...I hadn't given much thought to Olivia noticing the merrily tripping Broyles, after the fact. Ha!

[mack_the_spoon]

Hee, thanks. Yeah, I felt like that was a rather telling and interesting trait for her mental representation of her stepfather.

And I didn't really think about Olivia's reaction to Broyles at the end until after rewatching the episode several times - and then I realized it had to go into my fic. Broyles tripping will never not be hilarious.

[missyvortexdv]

Really good POV here, even though I had no idea I'd want to read this til I tried it.

[mack_the_spoon]

Thanks! I'm glad it could fulfill a heretofore unnoticed need. :)